Reviews for My Name is Taylor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love to see justice. Nothing quite like it. Whats truly horrible is that this situation isn't an exaggeration in the slightest. It is very accurate in that detail. Many stories just outright bash anyone who doesn't align with thier ethics or worship the main character or simply that they don't like them or even simply as a thier plot forward not caring about thier toxicity. That is just how messed up the world of Worm is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good, you should continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah! Great story idea, I love all the moving pieces coming together like this and seeing what Higgs is thinking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shadow form versus light powers... alas poor Sophia, we knew her well. |
![]() ![]() Guessing you gave up on this one to? So many stories dead... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would you just stop the story right there? If you're not going to show any form of commitment then don't bother writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much potential, I've been anxiously awaiting to see how things proceed from here and what plan Piggot & co. came up with. Any chance of this being finished? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that escalated quickly. Shame we couldn't see Piggot cowering in fear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() did you finish this anywhere else? or should i just hope so. Also Great story so far, |
![]() ![]() The cover up could be argued even further do to velocity’s actions of drugging Taylor without any attempt at communication (even if it was do to a misunderstanding). |
![]() ![]() I wonder what happened to the evidence of Taylor’s Trigger. Considering that the phone operator said not to clean off the biohazardous filth so that they could take pictures for evidence. Would the PRT have taken those pictures? Or even have kept the clothes? What about the locker itself? Depending on what they did it could be argued that they contaminated the evidence and were covering up the crime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAwww maaan this is a nice piece! i sure hope you will, at least, write a third chapter for this, the idea is divine and i'd LOVE to see Carols take in all of that! Hooo Boy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There definitely needs to be more of this. |
![]() ![]() This is an interesting take of Taylor having beef with the PRT, but without going villain. I hope you update this story soon, I can’t wait to see what happens next. I did see some of your ideas for the story on Spacebattles, I can see why New Wave would be a little hesitant to help the “villain” that “attacked” Winslow, but I imagine that they’d jump to her aid once they learn the truth of what happened (I hope that you don’t drag that aspect of the story out of you go down that path), especially when they learn what a ward was being allowed to get away with and how the PRT/ Protectorate handled Taylor calling the police for help after being attack/ triggering (even if it was the result of a corrupt agent’s vain attempt to get out clean). |
![]() ![]() Perhaps the Police Phone Operator was going to tell her to expect the PRT/ Protectorate to arrive or say that her call was being forwarded to them because she’s outed herself as a cape. |