Reviews for The Black Emperor
AdrianVnz chapter 2 . 1/23
So i know this fic is on hiatus (maybe even waiting for a rewrite?), but a good geass for Shirley would be something related to Lelouch, i am going to throw some ideas: maybe she sees Lelouch possible futures, obviously this would have to have some limits.

I was thinking sharing senses or seeing his location from afar as options but these feel weak, but it made me think of another cool option: she acts a sort of amplifier for his geas, like she synchronices with him (their senses) and this allows him to use his geas through her. This could even be expanded to work with others in some way or another too dependign on their geass and their relationship with her (either stuff like the power of friendshipor if she is the harem with fellow harem members).

Also please make her a harem member, she deserves happyness!
Milly's family chapter 1 . 10/17/2024
It turns that they were arranging dates and marriages so that they could pay off some debts (turns out that heavy partying has its consequences), so I think it's even more unfair that writers like you and Seerking depicted them the way you did.

What's more, if you're not passionate about a fandom anymore, you can always just stop.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/14/2024
Love it
Samurai Seven chapter 9 . 8/29/2024
Liking this version of Lelouch still has his original personality and more blood thirsty of course and believable strong , it's better if you didn't include Shirley in the harem ,no offense she too much Nunnally 2.0 ,bshe better off paired with Rivalz or Suzaku because their personalities much with her Goddammit ,screw Shirley
Eurasian chapter 9 . 8/30/2024
good fic
Jackfrost0930 chapter 9 . 8/9/2024
cuz shirley your dad is a piece of shit, btw thank your for not adding her i actually hate shirley she was a uneeded character in code geass to begin with i also ish you update this more i really enjoy this story
SacredKoopa chapter 9 . 7/26/2024
I'd personally like Shirley to join Lelouch's Harem, she's such a lovely and beautiful young woman that deserves all of the love in the world. I hated the fact that Shirley was written off as some possessive woman who wants Lelouch all to herself, I'm pretty sure she'd be fine with sharing her crush with a little coaxing. Also, since Corneila isn't completely related to Lelouch... will she also be joining the harem? If not, that's totally fine. In fact, I'm not too sure I know the harem anymore. I know for a fact that C.C., Milly, and Kallen are in the harem, but I don't know if there's anyone else. If you can, I'd like to be made aware of the complete harem at some point, please and thank you. Anyways, this chapter was certainly eventful, and I'm glad that I FINALLY got to read it! Keep up the great work Vortex, hope this fic gets an update some day!
Nevarus chapter 9 . 6/6/2024
causeh he was a very bad man, my dear.
Abbadon44 chapter 8 . 4/7/2024
I know it has been years since you updated this amazing work. I hope you will someday return to it because this is my favorite right up with Prepared Rebellion and Let me Share the Burden.
KMF-G chapter 9 . 3/31/2024
Well, it is really good story, even shaping to be highest calibre...

Nina likes Lelouch headpats too LOL

Anyway, looks like Kaguya will steal a march on Lelouch from C. C... dream coming true for her..
ExcaliberShooter chapter 1 . 1/27/2024
This was nicely written, good grammer, pacing, characterization, and descriptions. And I like Lelouch x Milly centered romance stories alot. Milly Ashford is very underrated.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/16/2023
I haven’t finished this series yet, but I’m loving it!
Lelouch is way more honest while he’s building his revolution, and that only makes him more intense. And it’s surprisingly interesting seeing him as a harem protagonist lol
And it’s awesome that Lelouch and C.C are building their own army of Geass users.
I’m really looking forward to how this Geass world will work out
pendragon87513 chapter 1 . 11/17/2023
My friend recommended this for me and it’s awesome. Lelouch comes across edgier than in the anime. It was interesting to see him planning ahead more and getting a relationship with C.C right away. This it really good and I’m definitely going to keep going
Lobisomen616 chapter 9 . 11/4/2023
...I'd just like to say, reading this last chapter and realizing that this absolutely FANTASTIC story hasn't been updated in 4 years caused me physical pain. I haven't had phantom whiplash like this in years, and the last time that happened, I had a legitimate medical reason for it that involved taking a 2016 Dodge Ram to the chest and being in physical therapy for several months. God I miss going to that chiropractor...
lossimpson1996 chapter 9 . 10/15/2023
i love this story, i hope you can write and upload a continuation.
i read your storys and belive you Will make more fantastic word.
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