So Puddings memory abilities aren't realated to a devil fruit in this? And it seems like some stuff is just tacked on. Like Luffy's haki. He doesn't really use it much in fights and he doesn't know hardening. It seems like it's just there so he is aware of the bijuu. But at the same time he doesn't mention it at all.

See what your dad could have given you Temari?

Thank you for this story! I love it so so much!

I want to say this to you , dear author. Your story is one of the things that lit up my life. It's so fresh, entertaining, and it's feels like reading what one piece is supposed to be ith a wonderful new world and ideas. I have been reading this story, countless of times. It mever fails to make me smile, laugh and all. I wish I can like more than one time because you deserved it so much. I know I shouldn't be pressuring you to go back, so I'll just hope you are alright there. Thank you for writing this.

This is way too sweet. I'm drowning in sugar omg..

This is amazing I love how zoro keeps getting lost and they can’t find him think he’s an expert

Love this story! Really hope life amd the muses allow you to come back to it!

You know that Zoro is from wano right ?

Woooooww,, Zoro’s so cool now! I like the exposition parts besides the main characters. I saw this story yesterday, it’s awesome so far!

Hello. I know this message is years later this is the second or third time I have read this story. I love it to bits. Could please continue writing this book. I know the show one piece is not finish yet, but I would really love to see what this story has in store next. You are doing an amazing job. Don’t give up on it. Thank you for this and can’t wait to read it another 10 more times.

ooooooo Joy Boy name has been dropped! Oooohhhhhhhh!

Aren't Naruto and Gaara both at the age where they would normally would have graduated from the ninja academy? While Naruto is more skilled in wind chakra manipulation in your story, without the use of shadow clones to fast-track his learning as he did with sage mode and wind chakra manipulation in canon, he'll be severely limited and fall behind the rest of the rookie 9. He could send a letter to Jiraiya if there's clone jutsu he could learn that requires more chakra, Jiraiya may even ask the toads to reverse summon him to Naruto's location to teach him the technique since he won't have the forbidden scroll. For the 2-year time-skip, Gaara and Naruto should be sent to Jiraiya to complete their shinobi training, Gaara may even connect with Temari and Kankuro if they can keep it hidden from their father. Part of that training could include training with Killer B to harmonize with their respective tenants.

With Obito actually dead in your story, then who actually controlled Kurama the night Naruto was born? It only makes sense with Obito/Tobi since Madara had died of old age around the time Rin was kidnapped and had the Sanbi sealed in her which would kill her and unleash it upon the village, forcing Kakashi to kill her by jumping in front of his Chidori which awakened the Mangenkyo in both he and Obito. Also, without Obito to carry out Madara's plans, who takes over the original Akatsuki and distorts their message, who controls Yagura the 4th Mizukage from the shadows with Kisame's help. Please don't actually have it be an immortal Madara still in his prime but weak.

Granted in canon, Kakashi was the only sensei that could teach Sasuke and when he learned that Naruto passed, he more than likely requested him because it was his sensei's son and he could finally attempt to do right by him, Sakura was an afterthought since they couldn't break the InoShikaCho and Kurenai wanted a tracking team which is why she has Hinata, Kiba, and Shino, so Sakura literally was the only one they could place with those two.

I can definitely see Gaara and Naruto, once they harmonize with Shukaku and Kurama, completely outclassing the majority of the One Piece characters, especially the Straw Hats. Luffy, once he fully awakens and becomes Joy Boy, will be equal to them or be just slightly stronger, until Naruto attains Toad Sage-Kurama Mode. Being a Toad Sage, he draws in natural chakra/energy from his surroundings and maintains an equilibrium so as not to turn into a toad statue. By drawing in that natural energy, that could potentially affect devil fruit users by drawing in the natural chakra of the vast seas.