Reviews for By Your Side is Where I Belong
Domonic chapter 24 . 2/20/2020
This is a really good story, and I sincerely cant wait to see the next chapter. Hope you continue this story, there are too many abandoned stories on this site that are so good, but were never finished.
tacktician chapter 24 . 2/1/2020
The flight with Crocodile it’s going to be interesting I just can’t figure out who would be the one who finally takes him down. Luffy, Naruto or Garra? because the idea of both sand users having a big battled utilizing their control over sand would be very interesting to read. But then you got Naruto who’s still the main character of the story who could be the one who takes him down. But you also can’t forget that Luffy is the one who takes down Crocodile in the manga.
So in the end I don’t know which one of the three to root for to take them down when the time comes.
A Thousand Shards of Glass chapter 3 . 1/28/2020
so this is like my fifth time rereading this, lovely story by the way, bit I'm just realizing that Zoro is essentially a Mandalorian. Finds weapons cool, takes in stray kids, and is a bounty hunter (pre Luffy) lol
dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 8 . 1/27/2020
There's an issue with your timeline. The villages haven't been around for even 100 years closer to 70-80. The sandaime was born either just before or just after the village system was created. He's not even 70. Also if you want to go with the villages are that old then how are they only on their 3rd kage? That means each one previous had to serve for many decades at a time when they had not. I think you know that yagura was the 4th mizukage who began the bloodline purge.
Animephilosopher1 chapter 11 . 1/15/2020
Wow. A really great chapter, one I could actually feel the emotional depth in from start to finish.

I love this story, and am extremely impatient for the next chapter to be uploaded. A little hypocritically since my own updates are few and far between as it is.

Your insights and opinions on Kakashi here are truly amazing. It's not excessive bashing or pulls some miraculous epiphany out of thin air for the character. Personally, I agree with some of your A/N observations, though I do consider Kakashi to have been suitable for a basic Genin team when Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto were assigned to him. From all his previous teams Bell-tests and the past "failures" shown applying those very lessons further in their lives, and his successful mentorship of Yamato and Itachi he was certainly a capable teacher.

Sakura, Sasuke and Nartuo each had specific deficiencies he did not recognize though and failed to address properly prior to Shippuden; although he came very close to the right mark by tying-up Sasuke and sharing his past with him. The Oto Four's own influence only counter-balanced that and left Sasuke's choice to balance on the edge of knife.

I've been writing my own Team 7 Story, with them dropped into the One Piece World: Growth Through Chaos. A big part of this story is how Kakashi is the only guy around who can teach the Genin any ninja-arts and has to be more responsible towards each of them as a sensei. Would you be interested in reading through Growth Through Chaos and giving some feedback on what I've done with Kakashi and his interactions with Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto? Especially in Chapter 4?
Sly Riddle chapter 24 . 1/10/2020
This is a fantastic fanfic I always love when Naruto and Gaara grow up together and zoro is francly my favorite... Cute brothers btw makes me think of the ASL bros! Is sabo still in the revolutionarys?
ThatOneGuyUpstairs chapter 21 . 1/3/2020
So does Eneru count as a Kamidere?
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 3 . 12/23/2019
I can't help but feel REALLY bad for Temari. She alone of their immediate family had the only one to really care for Gaara as a person and her brother. Some them not having practically ANY connection at all in this story is rather depressing for me. Still, this was a MUCH better setup to getting Gaara out of the village than what happened with Naruto in my opinion.
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 1 . 12/22/2019
Hahahahaha! You know, I was rather irritated about Zoro's portrayal in this chapter and just how much he already cared about some random kid he saved off the street. Granted, he was right to question and berate them, but his arguments seemed a bit too...caring for what I know of his character. Then again, this is a sadly old and exhausted trope common to most Naruto stories at this point. So I guess complaining about it is pointless.

But the scene that I THOROUGHLY enjoyed and was laughing hysterically at was towards the end with the various clans and dogs trying and failing to track Zoro. That was PURE One Piece right there! Great work on that!
Cane-Jian chapter 24 . 12/21/2019
Great chapter, the only thing I hzve a problem with is the statement that Dory (or was it Broggy?) is as big a Kurama, when the Kyuubi should be between twice, to six times the size of a giant. And go be fair, Naruto could just be exagerating/mistaken. So, overall, great job!
johnstonrichard3 chapter 24 . 12/21/2019
So vivi is a worshiper of the nine beast , i guess they are guardian spirits , are people going to star a religion around Naruto and garra now?
Steam Powered Crow chapter 24 . 12/21/2019
OK, I'm guessing that Vivi knows about the Biju due to her family being one of the founding 20.
GM10 chapter 24 . 12/21/2019
No killing Mr 2 pls, apart from that being a cruel thing to do, I'm curious of his interactions with New Straw Hats.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year author! :D
razmire chapter 24 . 12/21/2019
It was only a matter of time before the crew found out about the Biju in Naruto and Gaara, though the reverence that Vivi holds for them was definitely unexpected.
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