Best!

Robin and Tiki are a pretty rare and underrated paring. It’s done in a fic by Natzo called “Shattered Reflection” which plays a major role in Lucina’s timeline.

I’d go with Robin X Tiki, why? Cuz dragon babies that’s why! And having a factor like that raises the stakes to a much higher degree because of future Grima potentially having influence over the child who is most definitely a powerful in every sense of the word.

Hope your "decided Raven's pairing for narrative purposes" isn't Gaius. That pairing is so overdone!

Wow, this is totally going to be my new favourite soon. You've written well so far, please continue the work it really shows.

Pairings: Um...As long as it's not Robin x One of the female-children (Lucina included) or Cordelia, anything is fine.

Great chapter glad to hear you’re getting back into this sorry about your dog too

Nice to see you could be coming back for more updates. Lol Robin got lost because someone decided to point him to the church? Wow is that why Raven is pissed or it because he easily got distracted? I couldn’t tell. Never piss off Raven in the morning or she’ll punch and slap you hard. Frederick needs to not make people feel bad when they obviously protect the prince and princess.

As for the pairings PLEASE no second generation pairings. There’s way to many Robin x Lucina fics and first generation Robin x Cordelia. I’d love to see Robin x Olivia, Panne, Say’ri, OR Tiki. Those are much more rare and provides more diversity for Robin pairings in FEA fics. Hope that doesn’t offend you if you like Robin x Lucina. :/ I just want to see something more underrated and uncommon get attention.

I really enjoy the story so far! When I first saw the idea for it, I couldn't exactly see how you'd handle two tacticians, but so far you're pulling it off really well. I do want to give one piece of advice however. You seem to have a habit of repeating things. While it's fine for crucial details, having emotions repeated twice is unnecessary and kinda drags the conversations down. Still, good job! I can't wait to see more!

Welcome back this is a great chapter to re-enter on and on a personal note I’m getting out of highschool soon too I definitely know how you’re feeling.

Go for RavenxKallum and PannexRobin

CromxFRobin always. It's my favorite pairing!

I think that chromxraven is way better. Also robinxcordelia is fine.

This seems to be a promising story, as there aren't many stories where both the male and female are in the same world. Male Robin seemingly being the main character here is a plus too.

As for pairings, wouldn't hurt to go with RobinxLucina. That being said, please don't go the incest route with RavenxChrom if RobinxLucina wins out. RavenxGaius is a pairing that I like quite a bit. As a side note, if you can, I would like to see some ChromxSumia if RavenxChrom doesn't win. Cynthia as Chrom's kid/Lucina's daughter is great.

Why not both?

I will sure make a larger review when the story has progressed a little bit and I can point out more things that i may like or dislike but for now I will say that maybe Frederick x Raven might work well. It's an alternative to the classical Chrom x F!Robin that I think is still pretty good.