Reviews for Astrild's Restaurant
Jetflash chapter 3 . 12/29/2004
Is there any chance of this being updated? because if there is, please do.
Lone Templar chapter 3 . 12/8/2004
Another wonderful story. I really, truly hope that your muse starts working overtime on this one. I can't wait to see the mess that Gos and Akane can possibly make while 'fiddling' with magic. Keep up the good work.
dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 8/16/2003
"Shoo." Kasumi waved her skirts at the creature

Only Kasumi could expect that to work. *grin*

Everybody looked on in wonderment at Kasumi's change.

I think she's got a thing for intelligent mature men

and Ranma has just proven he is one.

I like the fact that you have Cologne following him

around taking notes. It just seems fitting somehow.

LOL. I like the Demon versus Akane angle. It's funny

as hell.

Did Ryoga just go to free Loki?

Hehehe. Gosenkugi with a love spell to miscast at

Akane. I wonder how that will react to the various

spells she's trying to cast?

It took the combined alchemists of three royal academies

several years to complete a working formula. Just like

science magic will be used to cure Baldness and

impotency before all else! *grin*

It will bring more gold into the coffers then a lead

into gold spell would!

I like the work you did on Astrild. It really cements

everything together.

I completely forgot abought Kaori. When are you bringing

her in? If she was on the honeymoon how is she reacting to

finding herself alone in Europe? At least she'll know the

number to call home. Only those there when the spell was

cast seem to have the original set of memories.

"Mousse's cheering just increased in volume"

Hehehe. Mousse no longer chasing Shampoo just

desperately trying to escape engagement to Akane.

I hope you have another chapter ready!
dogbertcarroll chapter 2 . 8/16/2003
"So... we are all ma... married? Every one of us except


“She didn’t go on the honeymoon. She’s not in any of the photos.”

Nabiki added.

"I got it! Enough already!"

LOL. It's worth reading just for that alone. *grin*

“Shampoo always hate it when stupid, obsessive boy get girl.”

"Maybe we could look at this instead as the virtuous hero reunited

with his lost love after vanquishing the evil sorcerer?” Nabiki joked.

The girls enjoyed a good laugh.


I like the way Ranma explains and uses magic. If you get a

chance you might want to write a series with him learning

magic. As he learns more abought magic he'll spend time

wondering who he'll end up with. Not to mention any female

traveling companions wondering if trying to be the perfect

future bride will make the magic pick them. The parameters

of the spell are unknown after all.

LOL. Nodoka's mind is as bad as Happi's in a certain way.

I love the girls reactions to the house.

Akane's attempt at casting a spell were just as

bad as I thought they would be. Of course I wasn't

expecting Daffy Demon. *grin*

Good ending point for the chapter.
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
"...Oh, and that Nabiki were alot nicer to me."

LOL! Perfect. The fact that it was just an offhand

comment made it all the funnier.

Everyone's reactions and the little details

like Ranma having prepared for just one bride

make this a great fic. Most people skip the

small things and write some inferior stuff.

*wince* Akane with a magic book. Her normal

cooking can be deadly and create types of

life man was not meant to know but add magic

to the mix? *shudder*

AARRGGHH Gosunkugi has part of an actual spell?

Things are going down hill directly. Well if

it's any sort of love spell he'll aim it at Akane.

"With a sudden, painful realization, Kasumi

discovered that wherever Akane lived, she no

longer cared to."

Great characterization. You have really set

the tone.
madking2099 chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
I can honestly say that I had enjoyed this fiction a great deal and would like to see it continued. I know that I am not the only one to like your works, but I would like to add mine to the voices of those who do thank you for what you have chosen to share with us. For once again posting this story, I am greatful. -madking2099
Praeceps chapter 3 . 4/30/2003
Really funny story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Do we get to find out what Ranma's been up to when he disappeared? I like the scandinavian tuch, don't see them too often... Keep on going!
DarkBlueHated chapter 3 . 2/28/2003
No offence but.. THREE CHAPTERS ONLY!

I WANT MORE, MORE, MORE, did I mention more? ~.

Well love it, but I sorta see some nasty Akane remarks, please make her more humane. O and she always thought Mousse was a pretty good guy.. maybe work on that, hehehehe

Well love this fiction so far and you didn't over do it with the super Ranma, in which I am grateful.

Please update soon, and good luck!

DarkBlueHated chapter 1 . 2/26/2003

so far that was prety interesting..

2 say at least. Im curious who thos other wifes are anyways. I thought the wish was for someone who TRUELY loves him.. but no one has introduced the other wifes like the one with the tatoos

Well i still like it so far!


theZifster chapter 1 . 2/19/2003
woo! I'm glad this fanfic is on the que to be continued eventually _ your fanfics may change characters around alot, but hey, that's one of the things I love about your style. Accuracy to the original in my oppinion pales greatly in comparison to a good read _ (and hey, who knows what effects that wish had on people any changes make perfect sense, because the author is always right _) Keep up the good work sky!
Kind Fearless Leader chapter 1 . 2/13/2003
Tee, Hee.

It's a pity the only good side of this bet will never be continued.


May this reach you in health, brother of sin _
elisteran chapter 3 . 2/11/2003
Amusing, although I seem to be noticing just a /slight/ anti-Akane bias... it'll be curious to see what action Ranma does take once he gets the chance; if he simply accepts the marriages as is, it could be ethically dangerous territory (Nabiki likes him because he /made/ her; you don't get much uglier than stealing free will, in my book). But will he turn his magic to freeing Nabiki from the niceness curse, or freeing Kasumi and Nabiki from the marriage (Kasumi doesn't seem especially pleased at the whole marriage).
Archangel N. Bloodraven chapter 3 . 2/10/2003
This is the first time I've had the pleasure of reading one of your works though I am quite familiar with both Metroanime and AnimeAddiction's work as well. Thoroughly enjoyable and I patiently await the next chapter.
Lup1n3 chapter 3 . 2/10/2003
I have to say that it is great to see you back around. I hope you will continue to grace us with your works for some time to come.
BlazeStryker chapter 1 . 2/10/2003


You Can Love Any Way You Want, In Astrild's Rest-u-Rant (Except be jealous!)

You Can Love, Any-Way You Want, In Astrild's Resturant!

Akane, If You Want Ranma Back, Lose The Attitude 'Cuz That's What Makes You Lack!

'Cuz You Can Love Any Way You Want, In Astrild's Resturannnnt!

(Apologies to Arlo Guthrie)

..Noiw that that's said, I adore this! You do realise between her Nice-To-Ranma compulsion and her understandable aversion to Akane making things worse, Nabiki will pit her considerable talents to foiling her at every turn?

You do? Good.


Good one. MORE!

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