Reviews for The Quantum Error: Progeny
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2019
This is an amazing series, you’re an epic writer. Btw I wish I had a thicc quarian gf.
Davo chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
I've bookmarked this to follow up on later. I was pleasantly surprised by your ability to write a story mostly independent of the Shepherd arc that was compelling. Of course some parts of it had weird pacing, but overall some of the best writigt I've seen in a while. Like I said I'll catch up on the trilogy later. For now I have immunology to study.
RedCenturionG chapter 3 . 2/28/2018
The idea of Sam having an old pipe that he doesn't smoke, only chews on, is giving him heavy Captain Keyes vibes...
Guest-Questioner chapter 20 . 8/14/2017
Hey, Hey!?

A story unfinished is a story unworthy to be read in its entire-ity

basically: come back when you ARE ready to finish the "trilogy"

to be fairly honest the VERY LAST sentence pretty much concludes it (for me)

(because there is no To Be Continued)

Sooo...meh...
Shadow of the Hitokiri chapter 20 . 8/13/2017
A third story? YES!
TheRangerBoy chapter 19 . 8/6/2017
You seem to build suspense with one FUCKING way to get out.

The whole fic is spent screaming NO NO NO NOT THAT... ANYTHING BUT THAT!

Then you do it... and oh boy does it add some epic tension. Saddening tension... but epic nonetheless...
Shadow of the Hitokiri chapter 17 . 7/16/2017
This story deserves far more followers than it currently has. Nice work!
Leante chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
Good writing, but plot and villans are cut from telenovela.
Shadow of the Hitokiri chapter 15 . 6/10/2017
Ha, that rampage though!
ashandareii chapter 14 . 6/1/2017
Holy crap Sam's a badass
Guest chapter 14 . 5/31/2017
Hulk smash?
Shadow of the Hitokiri chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
uh oh, Sam's is pissed.
DeltaVee chapter 13 . 5/21/2017
I thought that The Quantum Error was a great read by itself, but hot damn you've really outdone yourself with this sequel. Everything from the characters, their relationships, the setting, the dialogue, the action, EVERYTHING is top notch. I haven't enjoyed a fanfic as much as this one in a long time, and I can't wait to see where you take the story this time.

As a side note, I really appreciate the fact that you've stretched beyond Sam's POV in this one and given us a glimpse into the minds of other characters, it really freshens up the story and helps flesh out your characters, I hope you continue to do this in the future.

Also, I don't know whether to congratulate you for being an excellent writer or to feel sorry for whatever fucked up life experience you went through that allowed you to draw so much inspiration for your villains, but goddamn Rob do you sure know how to write 'em. There were quite a few moments, especially in this chapter, where I felt so goddamn ANGERY and helpless that I found myself fantasizing about what I would do if I could get my hands on the bastards. THATS a good villain right there. Bravo Rob, bra-vo.

The only thing I can mark against this story is the fact that I have to wait for the next chapter to come out. But if waiting a while means more quality content like what you've produced so far, then I'm more than happy to wait.

Keep up the great work!
Shadow of the Hitokiri chapter 10 . 4/16/2017
And now they have a Geth in the group. This will be interesting.
Shadow of the Hitokiri chapter 8 . 3/13/2017
Ha, this was epic. Eyzn and his mother clearly have a case of Xenism.
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