Reviews for The Quantum Error: Progeny |
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![]() ![]() This is an amazing series, you’re an epic writer. Btw I wish I had a thicc quarian gf. |
![]() ![]() I've bookmarked this to follow up on later. I was pleasantly surprised by your ability to write a story mostly independent of the Shepherd arc that was compelling. Of course some parts of it had weird pacing, but overall some of the best writigt I've seen in a while. Like I said I'll catch up on the trilogy later. For now I have immunology to study. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The idea of Sam having an old pipe that he doesn't smoke, only chews on, is giving him heavy Captain Keyes vibes... |
![]() ![]() Hey, Hey!? A story unfinished is a story unworthy to be read in its entire-ity basically: come back when you ARE ready to finish the "trilogy" to be fairly honest the VERY LAST sentence pretty much concludes it (for me) (because there is no To Be Continued) Sooo...meh... |
![]() ![]() ![]() A third story? YES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seem to build suspense with one FUCKING way to get out. The whole fic is spent screaming NO NO NO NOT THAT... ANYTHING BUT THAT! Then you do it... and oh boy does it add some epic tension. Saddening tension... but epic nonetheless... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story deserves far more followers than it currently has. Nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good writing, but plot and villans are cut from telenovela. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, that rampage though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap Sam's a badass |
![]() ![]() Hulk smash? |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh oh, Sam's is pissed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that The Quantum Error was a great read by itself, but hot damn you've really outdone yourself with this sequel. Everything from the characters, their relationships, the setting, the dialogue, the action, EVERYTHING is top notch. I haven't enjoyed a fanfic as much as this one in a long time, and I can't wait to see where you take the story this time. As a side note, I really appreciate the fact that you've stretched beyond Sam's POV in this one and given us a glimpse into the minds of other characters, it really freshens up the story and helps flesh out your characters, I hope you continue to do this in the future. Also, I don't know whether to congratulate you for being an excellent writer or to feel sorry for whatever fucked up life experience you went through that allowed you to draw so much inspiration for your villains, but goddamn Rob do you sure know how to write 'em. There were quite a few moments, especially in this chapter, where I felt so goddamn ANGERY and helpless that I found myself fantasizing about what I would do if I could get my hands on the bastards. THATS a good villain right there. Bravo Rob, bra-vo. The only thing I can mark against this story is the fact that I have to wait for the next chapter to come out. But if waiting a while means more quality content like what you've produced so far, then I'm more than happy to wait. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And now they have a Geth in the group. This will be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, this was epic. Eyzn and his mother clearly have a case of Xenism. |