I really like this so far. Though personally I would paired Revan with Asajj Ventress. Her journey through the series is amazing but they kinda ended it without telling what happened to her(although they did in the books). But Padme is a good choice too, in this story. And if you are going with a love triangle route, it'll make return of the sith more heartbreaking.

Please update this story

I hope you start up this story again and have him getting ready for the dark times to come for when the war begins.

1st I hope that HK is programed to kill Watto at the first opportunity.

2nd if Qui-Gon lives and becomes Anakin's master, then yes, an older Ahsoka who is the same age as Anakin and the Padawan of Obi-Wan, would be good.

Otherwise I'd go with Barriss Offee, if I remember correctly she's a year younger than Anakin and was on a mission with him and their masters Obi-Wan & Luminara on Ansion, quite literally just before AotC, it's the mission they were returning from in the movie.

Alternatively if I remember correctly, Aayla Secular, who is like a year or 2 older than Anakin, and her master Vos, who was a friend of Obi-Wan's, were on Tattooine at this time, so the two could meet here and fall for each other instead.

So option 1) Ahsoka as Obi-Wan's Padawan x Anakin as Qui-Gon's Padawan, while being the same age. Option 2) Barriss x Anakin as Obi-Wan's Padawan during the Ansion mission. Or Option 3) Aayla x Anakin, this could happen as early as the next chapter if Vos approaches Jinn for help and the Skywalker's get roped up into it, or at anytime during the next 10 years.

I'm not sure if an OC is a good idea, and I don't remember much about the 3rd girl...

I like option 2, rebuilding the old Je'Daii Order.

I love your story but I have to stop here. The characters always join the Jedi, who I hate with the passion of a billion suns. So thanks for the wonderful fic but good ye.

This is great chapter! Hope you continue to update this.

it's a very little thing but I hate how everyone messes up spelling TRIAL and accidentally writes TRAIL lol. it's not a huge thing or anything but it's something I notice a lot of lol.

I found this story by chance and already love it. Please update this story.

Dude, this story is sooo good! Please update!

was good but just so you know Palpatine was a Senator not Chancellor (there is no Supreme chancellor and then chancellor there both the same title)

Are you going to continue this

Not the biggest fan of a Revan/Padme. I was hoping he would take on a similar role to the old Revan, but this time bringing war to the Hutts instead of the Mandalorians. But Padme's ideals kind of hamstrings him from serious violence.

Please update it’s been and year and 3 months

Come on im desperate to know whether or not this Star Wars fanficton story is gonna to continue!? Please give us a update soon!