Reviews for The Return Of The Prodigal Knight And The Phantom Menace |
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![]() ![]() ![]() pleadd update this! |
![]() ![]() You wrote Je instead of he last pragraph of the intro. When you use a FANBOY you put a comma before it if separating two complete sentences. When separating to complete sentences please do not just use a comma. Acceptable methods to do this are the previously described method. A period and Capitalized letter or a semicolon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE PLEASE! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think it would be cool to see Revan reclaim his memory’s and bash the jedi about the old was when he was in the old republic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Hello there" What are the odds this story has a future? Genuinely such a good start to a story. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this series over? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know its been 2 years, but please update this story, to good to left like this. Gotta know what happened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, great story. It's not that often that a fanfic assumes that the Jedi order of the Prelogy is far from being as good as it seems. And the relationship between Padmé and Revan is very well written I think. I hope we'll have more chapters in the future. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't stop this. This is one of the better stories I have read here. Please come back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this so far. Though personally I would paired Revan with Asajj Ventress. Her journey through the series is amazing but they kinda ended it without telling what happened to her(although they did in the books). But Padme is a good choice too, in this story. And if you are going with a love triangle route, it'll make return of the sith more heartbreaking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you start up this story again and have him getting ready for the dark times to come for when the war begins. |