Reviews for The Return Of The Prodigal Knight And The Phantom Menace |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() gain all his memories before the clone wars |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter keep up the good work a few grammar errors here and there but great work as for revans memories now would be good that way when clone wars come up he could use similar tactics he used in the mandolorian wars but I think he should get them all back if he finds his mask again |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that Revan should reclaim all his memories of being trained and his saber styles in this story but I think that his full memory should not return to him until Geonosis because I think that maybe the all-out battle that occurs would be a fantastic trigger for them to resurface. |
![]() ![]() I would like to see Revan paired up with Bo Katan. Two warriors like themselves would be the definition of powerhouse. Tho, I'm not too sure on the age differences between them. Also, I think Revan should regain his memories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally understand with Jar-Jar. Obviously he’s going to be around, but he’s a difficult character to write, not to mention an annoying one. As far as I can tell, the best way to write him is to have the others constantly give him explicit orders not to touch anything. Yoga already seems to not have an altogether awful view of , so it bodes well for chances of not being reprogrammed or killed. Just read the entire story today, can’t wait for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like to see the Jedi Council especially the hot headed Mace Windu kill the child Revan and the Force itself manifest itself and removes it's power from the entire Council... Lets see how they fare without the presence of the Force... |
![]() ![]() Yeah I can see why this story never continued lol revan just rolls over for this entire situation like wtf? I would’ve said yeah zero chance I will become a jedi |
![]() ![]() Would’ve been more interesting if Revan stayed a slave for a bit longer and have his mom be freed... he can either somehow free himself or stays there little longer until Padme comes years later to free him. Or he frees himself or someone frees him years later then he finds out Padme is the Queen for real and she never helped him... idk seems cliche that he didn’t |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written I look forward to seeing the Councils reaction to the reveal about Revan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve enjoyed this story. Please update it soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow he just spit everything to qui gon? lame... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was thirsty for some Revan today. And i sure as hell got What i wanted! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story and i hope it gets an update soon ( : |