Reviews for Gorgon and Thanatos |
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![]() ![]() ![]() update this one, please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everything feels so bland I dunno why. Its like its being stated in monotonous robotic voice rather than being read like a story. Also "Ophis can be sort of big sister or aunt." , isnt she like just summoned yesterday and just introduced to Sakura this morning. Aren't you jumping the rails here fam. Everything seems to happening in your fic but how it is happening or why isnt being shown. The why's and how's is just being stated like an afterthought rather than being given the proper spotlight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really love this story can't wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story and my only complaint is that it was never finished. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Most interesting great chapter mate can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well…that could’ve gone worse… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… talk about inevitable… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that was interesting… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that worked out… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that’s a spark of hope… maybe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that’s messed up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh brother… here we go again… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… here we go again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh deer… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh brother… |