Reviews for Harriet Potter and Fresh Beginnings
Krys Griffin chapter 4 . 2/5
Greetings Magi,

You have an interesting start here, I hope you choose to follow up and continue it at some point.

Your writing is a bit rushed feeling, so I would suggest that you read it out loud. Doing so will allow you to hear where breaks need to go, as your normal breathing pattern will aid in your written words.

I would also suggest that you read more, to improve your sentence structure and pacing. While there are some really good authors on FanFiction, I would recommend the classics or more adult fiction/sci-fi at the local Library instead (Young Adult Fiction can be good, but might not aid your writing style as much).

Anyhow... good start, keep at it.

Later,

Krys Griffin
Christopher Scott chapter 4 . 1/22/2017
Nicely done. I liked the jumper and how much it meant to Harriet. Hermione and Harriet's meeting was fantastic as well. I'm looking forward to seeing their friendship progress. The story of the Doctors Granger was rather sweet, and I love how protective and supportive Petunia is. Professor McGonagall is a good guide, thus far, and I am definitely looking forward to the tour. truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
god of all chapter 4 . 1/22/2017
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
harryislife chapter 3 . 1/15/2017
Really interesting , I love Female Harry so can't wait to see what happens next
god of all chapter 3 . 1/15/2017
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Christopher Scott chapter 3 . 1/14/2017
Nicely done. I love how supportive Petunia was during her conversation with Harriet, and the letter to McGonagall was nicely done. I particularly liked the threat to Dumbledore and the slight crackle of ozone while Petunia was thinking of what she would do to him if anything happened to Harriet. I'm looking forward to seeing what's to come. truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
Christopher Scott chapter 2 . 1/7/2017
Nicely done. The plot thickens. Petunia as a legitimately caring aunt promises to be an interesting concept. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this, as well as Harriet Jasmine Potter's interactions with the wizarding world. Please update as soon as you find most convenient. truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
Christopher Scott chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
Fantastic work. The changes to the timeline promise to be interesting, to say the least. I'm looking forward to seeing where this tale goes. truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
trongod chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
Incredibly intense; may all the Muses appointed to you gather 'round and refuse vacations until this is done.