This story is beautiful. Is it complete?

What a beautiful, intricate story. Throw in a few rough past days, and I am in tears here.
I really don't have anything else to say, no constructive cricitism to give as I was too eager to read a next sentence to give any thought at all to anything else.

This whole story was heartbreakingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.

"This is awkward...but it's possible we might not die." Ha! That line was perfect. I literally laughed. Amazing story. Please keep writing.

A lovely start. I'm looking forward to more.