“Be quiet while I figure out how to kiss you.”
Because you write these characters so well, between their effortless rapport and banter, I often forget that in this universe theirs is an unprecedented partnership. The way this sentence reminds me of that fact makes their union all the more sensual and this line so incredibly erotic.

Nice...

An amazing story! Its poetic nick and judy reading about a fox and rabbit making love and we reading about them :3 nice concept beautifuly done :D

Great short keep it up loving them all especially Savage Dark

I'd love to see a meet the parents story. I haven't read anything by you I haven't loved! And I appreciate the care you take with grammar and punctuation too. Keep up the great work.

Lol. You know what book Wilde

Great story. I skipped the sex scene at the end, but the rest of it was excellent and well worth it for me as someone who avoids the sex scenes. I really like how you build them both up. Feels nice an real, not rushed, despite how fast paced your story is. The ending carried a heavy sense of heat of the moment, but the love and passion they had for each other was loud and clear.
oh and I did find it hilarious that she caught him playing with himself like that. You sure handled that bit well :p

...I think I remember that one month ban-hammer too. Although I hope that doesn't happen again, its still well worth following you on here too.

Why did Nick say "Wait. What book?"

Absolutely love it. Especially the ending. Finnick you slick little fox, good job.

This was an amazing story! It wasn't just smut or just hokey writing about it being perfect. I that you showed them as emotionally intelligent as well as sexual, so that it wasn't the only need or satisfaction. About to read your other zootopia stories. Keep it up! Mostly because if don't I'll be sad but also because it's good writing... :D

Great conclusion! And both realized what they want and need and really took the straight way to fulfill those.

Thanks for sharing!

This was beautifully well written! I love your attention to details and the way you portray the characters is perfect. I look forward to seeing your other stuff!

amazing, really just beautiful!

Hey man just wanted to tell you that the way you wrote this story paying attention to the little details made it so much better. I am writing a Zootopia Fanfic also but I lack that same attention to detail, it's mostly just the bones of a story concept. That doesn't matter just putting into perspective how good this story was, and I enjoyed reading it.

Well written. Really enjoyed reading this :)

Oh my word, you are AMAZING.