Reviews for Red and Grey
SlyAsAFox615 chapter 2 . 1/10/2018
An amazing story! Its poetic nick and judy reading about a fox and rabbit making love and we reading about them :3 nice concept beautifuly done :D
Axoisawesome chapter 2 . 11/14/2017
Great short keep it up loving them all especially Savage Dark
Guest chapter 2 . 8/4/2017
I'd love to see a meet the parents story. I haven't read anything by you I haven't loved! And I appreciate the care you take with grammar and punctuation too. Keep up the great work.
Lilly The Omega Wolf chapter 2 . 5/8/2017
Lol. You know what book Wilde

Great story. I skipped the sex scene at the end, but the rest of it was excellent and well worth it for me as someone who avoids the sex scenes. I really like how you build them both up. Feels nice an real, not rushed, despite how fast paced your story is. The ending carried a heavy sense of heat of the moment, but the love and passion they had for each other was loud and clear.
oh and I did find it hilarious that she caught him playing with himself like that. You sure handled that bit well :p

...I think I remember that one month ban-hammer too. Although I hope that doesn't happen again, its still well worth following you on here too.
Toons Girl chapter 2 . 4/23/2017
Why did Nick say "Wait. What book?"
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2017
Absolutely love it. Especially the ending. Finnick you slick little fox, good job.
S1a2s2h5a chapter 2 . 2/24/2017
This was an amazing story! It wasn't just smut or just hokey writing about it being perfect. I that you showed them as emotionally intelligent as well as sexual, so that it wasn't the only need or satisfaction. About to read your other zootopia stories. Keep it up! Mostly because if don't I'll be sad but also because it's good writing... :D
ShirQuickpaw chapter 2 . 2/13/2017
Great conclusion! And both realized what they want and need and really took the straight way to fulfill those.

Thanks for sharing!
Spliced-up-Angel chapter 2 . 2/12/2017
This was beautifully well written! I love your attention to details and the way you portray the characters is perfect. I look forward to seeing your other stuff!
PizzaFoxx chapter 2 . 2/9/2017
amazing, really just beautiful!
Justheresoidontgetfined chapter 2 . 2/8/2017
Hey man just wanted to tell you that the way you wrote this story paying attention to the little details made it so much better. I am writing a Zootopia Fanfic also but I lack that same attention to detail, it's mostly just the bones of a story concept. That doesn't matter just putting into perspective how good this story was, and I enjoyed reading it.
liss chapter 2 . 2/6/2017
Well written. Really enjoyed reading this :)
Kitsuyei chapter 2 . 2/4/2017
Oh my word, you are AMAZING.
WriteTheWorld chapter 2 . 1/27/2017
InsidiousAgent chapter 2 . 1/22/2017
A shame that you got hit by the banhammer. Your work is quality work, regardless of its sometimes sexual content (which isn't a bad thing at all, people just need to get over their sensitivities).

This piece is no exception. It pretty much has everything I love about your work.
Stellar dialogue, character development and portrayal of the characters and the emotions they're going through.

A highly enjoyable read through and through.

Don't ever stop adding to the fandom. Your contributions would be sorely missed.
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