Holy shit I was RIGHT

I wonder if Conan's shadow is actually Shinichi...

It's really interesting. I hope you will continue this story

I recently found this story and it already have 21 chapters wow! Really enjoy reading this, though I'm not a fan of p4, but you still make it good combination with DC. It makes me want to watch p4 anime lol. You make me curious who behind the kidnapping of DC cast, or will there be a new character? Will always be waiting for the next chapterp.s. omg, I scream when you mention CCS on your author's note XD

I wonder who's the culprit cause srsly, we don't get any exposure of anyone else asides them. Hope you'll update when you're ready.

Very interesting. I do hope we get to see the next chapter soon.

The only problem I really have is the rather large amount of Japanese used. Of course, using honorifics, certain titles, and cultural words/phrases that don’t have a real translation/English equivalent of the word, is expected. But I think you go a little overboard. You don’t need to say “otousan” every time when you can just say “Dad,” and you can just say “I’m home” instead of “tadaima.”

I also think that you should only define Japanese words that are newly introduced to the story or are rarely used, instead of defining every single one. For example, the first time you use “koban,” define it at the end of the chapter, but don’t define it again the next time you use it.

Some things just never need to be defined, such as honorifics, extremely commonly known cultural places/words (ie onigiri), spells used, and the fictional places often mentioned. If you don’t know what the most commonly used spells are or what Junes is, you clearly don’t know Persona 4 and why are you reading this fanfic in the first place?

I KNEW that I’d heard “Wind become a binding chain” from somewhere. I think the little references are a nice touch, since they aren’t blatantly in your face, and more like subtle easter-eggs for fans of Cardcaptor Sakura to enjoy.

It has been entertaining to read this. I liked the Ran - Conan chapters a lot, but more recent ones - specifically the Hattori part - seem without much consequence in comparison.

Hope you are doing well. The occasional use of Japanese feels random - sometimes I wonder why this word is Japanese but that one isn’t. But, Chan, San, Ware, ore, ehh. It’s not that bad... you do make the references at the end make sense, and i do understand it a little, but it feels random at times. (I suppose it’s not totally random - you could have written tabemono every time instead of food, and wouldn’t that serve no purpose..)

Oops, it became 3am before I knew it, haha.

I really enjoyed the story! I hope you managed to completely recover from your surgery, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Oh my god, how does this not have more reviews and favorites?

I've only read up to this point, and it is an extraordinary read. The characters aren't OOC, the grammar is on point, and you've implemented a glossary for us readers, which isn't even required. But that's just brushing the surface.

The plot is flowing smoothly, and the series are clashing well thusfar. Everything is realistic with the characters, and I find myself reading this word for word rather than skimming when I get bored.

I seriously look forward to reading more of this. Seriously, good job Author!

Second time reading this. I just caught the little reference you slipped in for Tamora Pierce's Song of the Lioness Quartet protagonist! Kudos!

Looking forward to more and nice job.

Thanks goodness that the surgery went well. I hope you recover soon. Btw, nice chapter, the characters are portrayed very good, i wonder if kazuha will get her persona, i imagine her dungeon is modern castle, and have romeo and Juliet theme. (lol). Im looking forward for the next chapter.

Huh. Now that I’ve rewatched CCS I’ve caught the references to Windy and Shadow rereading this chapter, with the Hitsuzen one being more xxxHolic ref than anything else in the Clamp multiverse.

cool