Reviews for The special someone
BlazingCourage chapter 1 . 1/2/2017
What a sweet story! I liked it soooo much, and I also like DaiKari! So, I enjoyed this story so much. TK! How dare you to leave Kari behind like that hah?! Luckily, there's Davis who always for Kari everytime :D. It's good Veemon wasn't there, because he'll ruin the moment XD *head butted by Veemon*

However, I still catch some mistakes and found that sometimes you wrote TK's name with "T.k". And another mistakes, as the example:

"C'mon Kari, the line is getting a bit long" said T.K as he run to the growing line to a ride

You must put coma sign after the character finished talking. So, like this:

"C'mon Kari, the line is getting a bit long[,]" said T.K as he run to the growing line to a , so that's it. I'll waiting for another DaiKari then! :D

Cheers,
Blaze
piccolaamica chapter 1 . 1/2/2017
cute :)