Will this ever complete?

Liar ! You finish nothing!

I can't believe you did not finish this or any of your other works. What is wrong with you?

Dual wands are even cringer, why do people always have to do stupid shit thinking it makes their MC more impressive or cooler when it obviously wouldn't work.

Another writer who doesn't understand how wands work. For starters creating a original wood was stupid, and the heart string of a ice dragon means nothing. The power of a wizard isn't from the wand but their own ability, the wand is just a conduit. The rarity of materials doesn't really do much unless it's a core that synergizes with a specific trat from your blood. All in all his wand is annoying at best and the ivory casing just seems stupid. Lastly custom wands are a cringe idea in the fandom because that's not how wands work, when they implement a core into a wand magic starts to flow through it giving an minor sentience that plays into a specific persons traits.

i'm sad your stuff seems abandoned. just stumbled upon this again and i see there's been no sign of life on your account. i hope you're doing alright away from fanfiction.

Penelle was an Evans before marriage which means a large chance she's an ancestor of Lilly, Harry's mother

Agree Ian Somerhalder would be better as Sirius, though you'd choose Ben Barnes for it

now that's Sirius influence showing right here

so said another strong friendship to be destroyed only for someone else own personal beliefs to gain

poor snape he have to endure 3 years with Black's child

this is interesting I'm loving this story already

Cutting the legs off of Tom and Dumbledore! But their are others that need neutering too!

I freaking love this story! Can’t wait to see what you do next!

How soon will Umbitch die! That’s one scene I never get tired of reading!