Reviews for The Last of the Peverells
Guest chapter 18 . 7/25
Will this ever complete?
Guest chapter 15 . 7/14
Liar ! You finish nothing!
Guest chapter 18 . 7/14
I can't believe you did not finish this or any of your other works. What is wrong with you?
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 6 . 5/30
Dual wands are even cringer, why do people always have to do stupid shit thinking it makes their MC more impressive or cooler when it obviously wouldn't work.
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 5 . 5/30
Another writer who doesn't understand how wands work. For starters creating a original wood was stupid, and the heart string of a ice dragon means nothing. The power of a wizard isn't from the wand but their own ability, the wand is just a conduit. The rarity of materials doesn't really do much unless it's a core that synergizes with a specific trat from your blood. All in all his wand is annoying at best and the ivory casing just seems stupid. Lastly custom wands are a cringe idea in the fandom because that's not how wands work, when they implement a core into a wand magic starts to flow through it giving an minor sentience that plays into a specific persons traits.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/11
i'm sad your stuff seems abandoned. just stumbled upon this again and i see there's been no sign of life on your account. i hope you're doing alright away from fanfiction.
airenj25 chapter 11 . 3/31
Penelle was an Evans before marriage which means a large chance she's an ancestor of Lilly, Harry's mother
airenj25 chapter 5 . 3/31
Agree Ian Somerhalder would be better as Sirius, though you'd choose Ben Barnes for it
airenj25 chapter 5 . 3/31
now that's Sirius influence showing right here
airenj25 chapter 4 . 3/31
so said another strong friendship to be destroyed only for someone else own personal beliefs to gain
airenj25 chapter 3 . 3/31
poor snape he have to endure 3 years with Black's child
airenj25 chapter 2 . 3/31
this is interesting I'm loving this story already
blcoachmac chapter 16 . 3/28
Cutting the legs off of Tom and Dumbledore! But their are others that need neutering too!
blcoachmac chapter 15 . 3/28
I freaking love this story! Can’t wait to see what you do next!
blcoachmac chapter 12 . 3/28
How soon will Umbitch die! That’s one scene I never get tired of reading!
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