|Reviews for Twenty-Three Percent|
| www.orijinvt chapter 23 . 9/13
It’s been years already but I remember how much I loved this fanfic. I was kinda thinking of making a spin off credited to the original ofc but at the time I wasn’t really confident in showing people my work. This fanfic inspired my imaginations a bit and altho it’s a satisfying ending, I was still craving more… I wonder if you can still see this comment but when you do, do hit me up on my dms on Twitter: ORiJinVT. I started writing scripts now if you wanna do a collab for my lore that would be awesome.
| Hooded Phoenix chapter 23 . 8/21
Wow, that was the longest 33k words I've read (and i mean that in a the best way possible). I'm not sure how to describe my feelings regarding this story, but the feelings ambiguity and vagueness and sense of emptiness reminscent of "sayu" feel apt and intended. Overall, i think i can say with about 77% percent accuracy that I love this story. And the ending is probably the happiest it could have gotten, or at least the closest it could've gotten to a happy ending.
Although, i would love to see more perspectives- Light, Soichiro, Sachiko, as well as L after everything.
Also, is she essentially cursed to relive until 23 since that first suicide attempt? Is she really reincarnated or is this some sort of purgatory due to the sin of suicide?
| FangirlonfireAAHHH chapter 23 . 8/6
The flagship of all Sayu Yagami self inserts you can find around Dethnote's fandom. This is the God mother of them all. No. Not only that. Whenever I ask my other fan-friends abt their fav deathnote fanfics, this darling is bound to come up in their top 10! Absolutely amazing. No better words to describe this beauty just fantastic!
| jammyjamster38 chapter 23 . 7/25
This was so fucking good scrumptious delicious i ate this all up and i am not nearly as full as i want to be, i will binge read every other fic that you have written because of how good this story is. Best fic ive ever read ong i will eat again and again and reccomend to others, amazing, filling, and left me wanting for more. (GIVE ME MORE)
| Gliychra chapter 3 . 7/16
i have given her Kari's voice
| MaharaniMisora chapter 23 . 7/4
Oommgg love thiiiss so much!
Like...this is the happiest ending u could ever get with DN
| MaharaniMisora chapter 15 . 7/4
This somehow heartbreaking..
But I love this so much..
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/25
Are there words, real words which could describe how I feel after reading these 23 chapters straight? What, I guess its near 3am. Damn. I mean really, damn!
You don't know author just how much I wished these two to be targaryen siblings. I was waiting for something like that! But it never came. Anyways... what you gave us here is already too much so no problem
I'll just say this simply:- THIS fanfic is 10 stars. No hesitation, absolutely amazing I just can't. *hugs*
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/25
Chapter 1 only & I think its damn awesome!
| bingheayuan67 chapter 1 . 4/20
cringe ass story. u try to make your OC equal to Light and L but she's just fucking dumb. How the fuck can she not control what she talk about LMAO. the family think she's a genius bc she blurt out “mature” and “somber” replies when she talk to them like bffr. that's the stupidest shit I've read. you really want me to believe that someone that is so retarded that she couldn't even control and manage what she talk about is supposed to be a genius comparable to Light and L? HAHAAAHAH fucking rertard.
| THOTSLAYER9000 chapter 3 . 3/28
| readwritemm chapter 23 . 1/17
Ooh so interesting! I love this story! Thanks so much for writing and I hope you’re doing well :)
| Guest chapter 23 . 10/21/2022
This is amazing! Thank you for writing this 3 3 3
| imAwonder chapter 23 . 8/2/2022
Fck this is so f-ing amazing! I love this! Your writing is sooooo f-ing amazing! Straight through the heart! Love everything A masterpiece You brought a new narrative to an already existing story (I don't know if I said this right but yeah, Kudos). A FAV!
| Omnireceptacle chapter 2 . 7/20/2022
Fuck you mean, "not your typical." It's literally a carbon copy of 99% of every fandom's most followedliked