Reviews for Trail by elements
spider2016 chapter 14 . 4/28
update soon as you can please
hunzbookwyrm chapter 14 . 4/27
Great update hope to see more soon
hunzbookwyrm chapter 12 . 4/6
Just love story so far, Can't wait for the next update
Guest chapter 11 . 3/23
Just love story so far, Can't wait for the next update
spider2016 chapter 10 . 2/18
Please write more of this story.
David786 chapter 10 . 2/4
geting good cant wait to fine out who the evil which is
skooglie1 chapter 2 . 1/27
Your beta may help the details but you need to go back and work on the floor and the grammar of the story.

At the moment it feels like a landslide, with goop being dropped on you and weighing you down.

It's mainly the talking I have an issue with really, there is so much in large chunks that could be cut back, HOWEVER (can be used instead of but...) if you fixed the grammar it would be fine.
god of all chapter 9 . 1/27
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/22
c'est génial vivement la suite
hunzbookwyrm chapter 8 . 1/23
Just love story so far, Can't wait for the next update
David786 chapter 8 . 1/22
i am glad u went with only one phoenix for both of them and not one each i am really enjoying the story keep it up cant wait for next chapter
xNaruHina chapter 1 . 1/18
Only one person should speak in a paragraph..
David786 chapter 7 . 1/16
getting good cant wait for your next chapter
god of all chapter 7 . 1/16
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
god of all chapter 7 . 1/16
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
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