Reviews for Heliocentrism
mutecebu chapter 3 . 8/30
Thanks so much for this story! It worked great as a nonsensical jaunt. Seeing things from this Shimura kid's point of view was great fun. It's fun to see the ninja take the hininx Deadly Seriously, looking underneath the underneath.

Sorry, kids, it's dripping yellow madness all the way down.
mutecebu chapter 2 . 8/30
This story is great fun! I love that you chose to focus on the zanyness of Gamer Minato rather than focusing on the power trip. The academy response was great - do we graduate him now, or throw him in T&I?
Guest chapter 3 . 10/23/2022
Pls update! I really love this story! I love how you're using others' perspectives to tell Minato's story. It makes the story more compelling than if it were solely in the first person. Plus, it's always interesting to know what's going on in other people's heads. I want to know what will happen next! Please!
TheUnknowableOne chapter 3 . 9/22/2022
Fanfiction just sent me a notification that this had updated. It was a lie.
Oucs O.Iveel chapter 3 . 9/4/2022
Ah! I'm hearthbroken that this is dead.
jcampbellohten chapter 2 . 8/25/2022
I LOLed at the thorough looting. Other parts were also funny.
afterrhoshi chapter 3 . 7/18/2022
I lovelovelove this
Let Me BeLazy chapter 3 . 6/2/2022
This is interesting.
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 4/26/2022
lol anyway great chapter
PasiveNox chapter 2 . 4/26/2022
damn nice nice
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 4/26/2022
nice chapter and start
SeikoTuNeR chapter 3 . 4/25/2022
This is an amusing read. The random gamer talk cracks me uuup. Favorite list it goes!
RosewoodRising chapter 3 . 2/5/2022
I would love to see more of this! Minato with the gamer ability is a brilliant idea and I’m glad you came up with it!
Birch Banterous chapter 2 . 12/28/2021
This is really entertaining. Cheers.
MyLifeIsUtterShit chapter 1 . 11/2/2021
what? what? noo, you can't end here! ahhh- what?
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