Reviews for Heliocentrism |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks so much for this story! It worked great as a nonsensical jaunt. Seeing things from this Shimura kid's point of view was great fun. It's fun to see the ninja take the hininx Deadly Seriously, looking underneath the underneath. Sorry, kids, it's dripping yellow madness all the way down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great fun! I love that you chose to focus on the zanyness of Gamer Minato rather than focusing on the power trip. The academy response was great - do we graduate him now, or throw him in T&I? |
![]() ![]() Pls update! I really love this story! I love how you're using others' perspectives to tell Minato's story. It makes the story more compelling than if it were solely in the first person. Plus, it's always interesting to know what's going on in other people's heads. I want to know what will happen next! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fanfiction just sent me a notification that this had updated. It was a lie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! I'm hearthbroken that this is dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOLed at the thorough looting. Other parts were also funny. |
![]() ![]() I lovelovelove this |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol anyway great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn nice nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter and start |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amusing read. The random gamer talk cracks me uuup. Favorite list it goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to see more of this! Minato with the gamer ability is a brilliant idea and I’m glad you came up with it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really entertaining. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what? what? noo, you can't end here! ahhh- what? |