Reviews for Heliocentrism |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really nice story! Hope it gets a second wind one day :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() And yet the train disappeared. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why never more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO minato tambling using gaming terms was so funny. “One-shot you” LOL. I wish youd update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If This Minato used the reading as effective as reading gives freeBint and Wisdom would be great Otherwise it's AWESOME AND want to continue. it was quite inspiring. Especially I loved the system and the training. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is inteligence from looking the book, and is inteligence from knowing what is written and getting wisdom from Understanding WHAT IT MEANS AND USES |
![]() ![]() ![]() Genuis work dude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks so much for this story! It worked great as a nonsensical jaunt. Seeing things from this Shimura kid's point of view was great fun. It's fun to see the ninja take the hininx Deadly Seriously, looking underneath the underneath. Sorry, kids, it's dripping yellow madness all the way down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great fun! I love that you chose to focus on the zanyness of Gamer Minato rather than focusing on the power trip. The academy response was great - do we graduate him now, or throw him in T&I? |
![]() ![]() Pls update! I really love this story! I love how you're using others' perspectives to tell Minato's story. It makes the story more compelling than if it were solely in the first person. Plus, it's always interesting to know what's going on in other people's heads. I want to know what will happen next! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fanfiction just sent me a notification that this had updated. It was a lie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! I'm hearthbroken that this is dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOLed at the thorough looting. Other parts were also funny. |
![]() ![]() I lovelovelove this |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting. |