What fun do u seriously get by hurting and torturing everyone in the story like that?
But I must say it was awesome! It feels so good to read something so thrilling after so long ;)

Noooooo, why did you end the story like that!? Kai is on flames and dying here! How is that an ending for a book!? Chapters end like that, telenovelas end that way too, but not stories! Not books!
I'm up for a rebelion here! I demand the next part before someone tries to kill you for burning Kai to death!
No seriously, it was awful, please consider my poor heart and upload the continuation... Pretty please.
See you next story... And stop torturing Kai, I won't give you review otherwise. Is a bad habit you have too break before is too late. ;D

When things star to go well, you just have to turn them around... After the trauma from last chapter I was starting to think you'd end the drama there. My bad, I should have known better.
Remember, Tyson is the main character of a children's cartoon, don't kill him. Or you shouldn't, but then again, what is the fun in following the rules?
Soooo, the Kai x Ayah is now impossible? I was kind of looking forward to it, such a shame.
And about the bitbeast explaination... Well... It was not your best one, that's all... Sorry...
Thank you for this chapter! I hope Tyson survives, even if I don't like him that much! Best wishes!

Mess up, really mess up. That's all I have to say about this chapter. The author-reader relationship is mess up as well by the way.
I'm not much of a masochist so I hope this gets better... Can it get any worse? Goodness don't answer that question, much less write a chapter on it.
Best wishes to you and your family.

just update it as soon as possible!

Pretty cool chapters I must say!
And is this Cain an idiot? At least he should have separate showers...!
So he has involved a lot many bladers too ... And I was thinking that it all revolved around the bladebreakers only. Emily and Tala's entry was unexpected from my side and it was a pleasant surprise indeed!
I'm looking forward to the reason of how Emily landed there... And is Kai seriously gonna kill ... Whosoever he was assigned to..

I didn't get the answer to my question in the previous review! *frowns*

Oh goodness! I don't know what should I write, this is making me nervious! Please don't be mean and post the next chapter as fast as you can!
Goodness, the feeling of getting a vaccine: trapped but necessary! If it's going to hurt just make it fast, that kind.
See you next time!

I like this. Looking forward to next one

That was depressing, very depressing. But I apreciate the intent of humour when Kai commented about the low budged stuff, totally uncool, but coming from a man-bird with an huge ego and little care.. Well I kind of get it. And it looks more realistic.
I hope it gets better, it kind of left me a bit depressed.
See you next time!

Wow! Oh my God, this was a really exciting chapter! Well done! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!

Oho.. Pretty cool!
But Ayah doesn't have feathers and since Cain said he is like her why does he have them?
What did Cain mean by saying "All of them"? Is he on a mission to swipe the entire human species?
Oh God I wanna know what will happen... Updast Faaasssstttt!

Evil overlord indeed, get it together Kai, you really are inside of a cartoon!
Did you notice that those two could make a comic duo? I was laughing at their interaction, sorry I couldn't take it seriously.
Thank you for this amusing - sorry about my strange point of view - chapter. I had fun reading it, except for the part in which he explained his plans for Ayah, I was in sync with Kai's thoughts at that moment.
Best wishes, see you next chapter.

Why does Ray seriously think that in whatever happens to Ayah Kai will be responsible for it? Tyson's entry was timed well or else i was feeling as if Ray will end up pulling a fight with Kai.
And, you assassinated THE PRESIDENT OF US? XD
Who? Trump or Obama? XD

Update soon!

You killed THE president of USA! Thank god is not Obama anymore. Just jocking, I don't know Thrump enough to even dislike him.
Thank you for the chapter, now I'm convinced that you like to hurt your main characters, first Mai, now Kai... I don't even want to know how you treat Yuugi.
Still I love your stories, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Best wishes! And some kisses for your baby!

Seriously, Ayah was the reason for Kai's condition?!
Whatever I just want an Update...! The sypnosis is so promising and sounds so interesting that i won't mind if you upload the whole fic at once :P