Reviews for Blood is Thicker than Water
Lighahura81 chapter 1 . 10/13
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"It's, uh, I just need a little time to catch up, that's all!" He laughed again. "We can't all be as talented as you!"

Impossible.
LigSarahightah 23 chapter 1 . 10/13
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"O-Oh, yeah, definitely! I'll beat you one day, Luna, just you wait!" He was grinning so hard his face hurt.

Amazing!
SansnaX73 chapter 1 . 10/13
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She mooed. The tauros mooed back. She mooed again, and the tauros responded by headbutting her.

Come on...
OOlennsX5 chapter 1 . 10/13
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Mallow grabbed him by the shoulders, her face suddenly somber. "You're already a great trainer, Hau. Listen. I've lived here all my life, and I've never seen anyone do what you just did. I think you have a real talent for this."

Impossible.
Lovely little fae making her w chapter 1 . 10/13
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"Yeah, of course!" Hau said. "But I really gotta get better at battling too. Everyone wants me to be a great trainer, but I'm… not there yet, haha."

Wow!
Manninisnya.54 chapter 1 . 10/13
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Hau yelped as the boy lunged forward and grabbed him by the shoulders. "You're not fine!" His voice cracked into a high-pitched whine, much like Hau's had earlier. "Don't ever say you're fine when you're not! Because it doesn't help! You'll just hurt yourself and everyone…!" He wasn't staring at Hau anymore – more like staring through him. His eyes were wet and glistening. Then, just as abruptly as he had lunged forward, he stepped back, clutching his face and breathing heavily.

Impossible.
MniMantannis-75 chapter 1 . 10/13
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But right now, the sun hung low in the sky. Hau would have gladly spent the rest of the afternoon here, but something nagged at him to get a move on. It would be cool if he could get to the next trial before Luna, for once…

this is gold...
SaberurriaX97 chapter 1 . 10/13
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"It's fine! Pokemon battle all the time in the wild!"

Strange O.o
SophiraSSarah-95 chapter 1 . 10/13
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"Hey." It was Mallow again. "It's… Hau, right?"

Come on...
SanSisa-41 chapter 1 . 10/13
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Hau just stared stupidly. "Uh… are you okay?"

Give me a break :(
SasTa-5 chapter 1 . 10/13
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Battling was harder than he thought, harder than the manuals and the matches on TV had made it seem. It didn't feel right to stay back while Rowlet got hurt. But Rowlet didn't seem to mind, always jumping into his arms and trilling triumphantly after battle, even when he woke up after a loss. Hau still liked feeding and playing with him better.

Nice!
MadisonadMadidison.4 chapter 1 . 10/13
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A golbat. Pikachu should have been able to handle it, but she was already weakened from the trek. After they traded blows, Pikachu fainted, but the golbat did not. Hau hoped he could finish it off with Dartrix, but he couldn't react fast enough. Dartrix fell to a wing attack, Hau's shout coming just a second too late.

Nice!
MeganSH056 chapter 1 . 9/1
Stop telling me how to write my stories you fucking asshole and get a life! I'm a really good writer and my stories aren't awful!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28
This story has more padding and filler than an anime that catches up with its manga...
FieryLeaf12 chapter 1 . 6/24
Not bad for a one take.
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