|Reviews for Into The Black|
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/17
Please come back to finish this story!
| Jose19 chapter 5 . 8/26
There is a small mistake of note in the story when Anakin stormed the temple he did not show hesitation or mercy to the Jedi included the Battlemaster.
The only ones that caused him pain and regret were the younglings he killed .
| pincho chapter 13 . 6/5
Sigh, you did a great job on this story...but I think you let Plums and Kat influence you too much as this and most of your other stories are unfinished/abandoned.
| pincho chapter 9 . 6/5
While a decent offshoot of Plum and Kats story, it is a bit off putting that we see the "inner thoughts " of almost every character introduced but Harry. It's like he is not really there just an offshoot that can generally be ignored due to lack of substance.
| Mando-Vet chapter 13 . 5/13
This is an outstanding story, and one that I hope you return to finish one day as it is too good to be abandoned.
| Mando-Vet chapter 1 . 5/13
Lol, what a surprise, Ron's a dick
| Jimbocous chapter 13 . 3/14
Thanks for a great read so far. Would love to see more of this. far and away one of the best HP/SW crossovers I've seen. Sure hope you find your way back at some point.
| Revliledpembroke chapter 13 . 3/2
Man... That September must have been really busy. You still haven't updated this story!
| Revliledpembroke chapter 8 . 3/2
It's really funny to me how often you're apologizing for being late while updating, given that you wrote 13 chapters in around 20 months.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaay better than some people on here. Like Plums! Or his co-author, kathryn518.
| Revliledpembroke chapter 1 . 2/28
Ah, yes, another obvious Harry/Hermione set up where the author just *has* to completely ruin the character of the three Weasleys they always have to ruin: Ron, Ginny, and their mother.
You just can't help yourselves - you have to demonize those three at every opportunity. Hell, you even managed to make Hermione look dumb in this one. You think the canon version of Hermione - a woman who has been an Equal Rights For House Elves activist since she was 14 - EVER go out with the sexist Ron you created?
No, she wouldn't have. She would have dropped him at 14 - if not sooner.
(I also don't think that somebody raised by Molly Weasley would ever be sexist when they're all afraid of her.)
I also think this sexist Ron you created would have adamant about Ginny playing Quidditch in school - he wasn't.
Ron's *actual* flaws are: being a literal child and not wanting to work super hard, a tendency to speak thoughtlessly, and insecurities brought up on by being both the youngest boy and being a middle child.
Sexism is not one of his flaws - neither is being anti-intellectual.
FFS, how does a sexist anti-intellectual end up dating Hermione anyway? Oh wait, I know... Molly was slipping them love potions. Bah!
Stop making characters canon heroic characters evil!
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 6 . 1/27
Since this is all AU, it depends on which author you are reading, as to which Jedi were chosen to live and how they let the others die. I have see where offee died on Felicia, and where she was a sith like ventress, and even where ventress lives and helps. I just wonder if Tano made it and if so, where she pops up.
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 3 . 1/27
I truly love her description of Crooks when she first awakens. How accurate!
| omh666 chapter 13 . 1/5
I was actually really really impressed with this story. I hope to see future chapters if you get the chance. Thank you for what you've already posted for us to read however.
| SunPho3n1x chapter 13 . 12/3/2022
This has been such a great story! I have very much enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing this!
| MoinLeute chapter 2 . 11/25/2022
this is honestly getting overused, with Harry and Aayla meeting on Felucia...