Reviews for The Root of Darkness
fluitt.charles10 chapter 15 . 10/17
in naruto is the fact that everyacademy student should know bout naruto second is that he is the oldest konahva genin remember he was in the academy 2 before the current academic year maybe 3 times making him older than all of them
fluitt.charles10 chapter 15 . 10/17
1 thing ive always hated
fluitt.charles10 chapter 9 . 10/16
late but please realise you fucked up the timeline cause kushina has naruto after obito fake dies
fluitt.charles10 chapter 1 . 10/16
im sorry for commenting right away but naruto is actually made that dumb on purpose which is not only to build character and plot but because he has been gaing empathy skills since so young that he mastered talk no jutsu not the meme kind but he built up his empathy so much even if his life is nothing like yours and he hates you he can still always see your point.

1. he also needs to be that dumb because of sensory overload.
2. he has lived the life of thousands during the fourth war plus being smarter would of made it difficult to build empathy like how smarter think more logicaly and dont understand emotionally
Cap'n Mel chapter 2 . 10/8
Where are the perks?
Ricee chapter 38 . 10/4
dang, hasn't been updated in over 4 years. I just binge read this in a night and it was really good.
Ricee chapter 12 . 10/3
the way you write actions while someone is speaking is grating me. "This' pointing to the table' is the book" no, you don't usefor that. They are separate sets of dialogue. "This" She says, pointing to the table "Is the book" us infinity better
Ricee chapter 9 . 10/3
not a big fan of mito. was completely expecting Naruto to be born and for kushina and minato to die.
tfuinsah chapter 38 . 10/3
It's a shame that the story was dropped, but it was fun while it lasted!
tfuinsah chapter 1 . 10/2
I think it's a bit strange how low the higher level stats are. Assuming they're linear, four genin would theoretically be equal to a Hokage in strength. That just sounds weird to me.
Vorpal-Sol chapter 4 . 10/1
Reads like a run on sentence. Couldn't get past chapter 2. Interesting start though.
Ghost012 chapter 2 . 9/28
I wish I owned naruto too
Ghost012 chapter 1 . 9/28
A pity I dont know the adress of where he locked you up
Dragrace34752 chapter 38 . 9/22
Great story, shame it wasn’t updated though at the start i’ll admit I was a bit annoyed at year first expectations at him, a two year old.
KnightsKing chapter 38 . 9/21
This/was a good story

Sucks it hasnt been updated
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