Reviews for Warrior of God
lululillie chapter 7 . 10/27/2017
Says sometime who's never written a story in their life lol
belle hawk chapter 2 . 10/27/2017
Lacking imagination ? Really? Honestly I wouldn’t even review if you hadn’t wanted a review to see how your readers see the story. If you can’t accept criticism then don’t ask for a review. Also whenever someone writes don’t want don’t read, all I see is someone who lacks the courage to accept their shortcomings and too lazy to fix their story. As it is I don’t want and won’t read it, don’t worry
belle hawk chapter 1 . 10/27/2017
I'll be frank you need to rewrite it. You hurried the story so fast that it doesn't make sense. Cariel and Potters' stories don't make sense. You never explained what happened there, why Harry was a seal, how he became a seal and what was it's importance. Lily was pregnant one moment next Harry was a grown up with kids only to disappear from the story. You rushed too much. The plot was interesting but you gave up on it. You could have Harry grow up under Cariel's wing and created a stronger and meaningful bond between the angel and her charge. You could have written about Cariel trying to protect Harry from angels and somehow taking him to America to enlist Castiel and his charge's help in his protection. You could have had Harry as the last seal that must be broken instead of Lilith. With the introduction you have written you can do many things
Guest chapter 3 . 1/12/2017
very nice