Betrothal contracts? Bride price or dowries? Things which are prevalent throughout pureblood wizarding culture and history would indicate a complete lack of egalitarian values that are biased, demeaning and devaluing towards women often working out in the favour of men. Also, where do you see examples of a stay at home dad/husband in the Harry Potter universe? Hermione might have a superior intellect to some of her peers however she is significantly weaker in terms of how much magical power she actually posesses. Where's the egalitarian attitudes in that? Minerva Mcgonagall is a powerful witch true, but she's not as powerful as Albus Dumbledore, Narcissa Black could be considered more intelligent, more compassionate, morally superior to her husband, but in other respects she in no shape or form matches the power output of her husband. You could argue that because some of the women display a keener sense of intelligence than their counterparts that what the women lack in raw power they make up for with other assets but as there's no fair way to measure or account doe something like that how can anybody be certain that the partners are equals of each other. They do not balance each other out. There were three male ministers for magic before there was a female one. I don't know if this is due to a lack of representation, reflects real life values, but either way as a reader one cannot simply deny that there are aspects of wizarding society that blatantly favour males over females.

I really loved reading this story but Hermione didn't get to shine at all as the tough smart cookie she is. Harry got to be almost God like but Hermione was more the Anginue shrinking flower for Harry to rescue. which is good in a way, but makes it harder to let Hermione shine too.

You didn't specify, but did Greengrass get away?

This was VERY interesting and I thought it was well told. *two thumbs up*

Thank you for creating and sharing this wonderful story !
A fitting tribute to broomstick flyer who is sorely missed.

Thank you so very much for sharing this truly wonderful story with all of your fans. I honestly think that JK had to be doing some HARD drugs not to see that Harry and Hermione belong together being so much more than just friends. I don't guess that if I beg we could maybe get a small sequel to this story? Please think about it. Until then take care and stay Healthy, Happy and Strong!

That was nice, very nice... for the first part i thought i had already read it but something wasn't right...but it was that other one that i did read.
I'm just wondering how they could be ministry consultants and never been seen around the ministry itself (without cloacks i mean) ;-)
Thank you for sharing!
Ciao

Draco Malfoy? Really? It was so...predictable. And contrived.

Ew. Why is your version of an unspeakable a glorified pimp?

It's like 007-wannbe with a wand.

Hello, I've never really commented on a fic before but...I'm been forcing myself to keep going with this and I've hit on what grates on this:

1) Hermione is Lavender level dumb while Harry is perfect Mr Smart
2) You've got Unspeakables as James Bond. That's...not what they are. They're not undercover spy operatives - they research the mysteries of the universe.

Yo, HARRY is the one about boundaries and Hermione isn't? This is directly opposite to canon. Whoa this is whack- you got Hermione at about the same level of brains as Ron, which is bad considering she's a genius and Harry is OK and Ron is dumb as bricks.

so...in this weird world of yours, Harry is the logical, clever, mature one and Hermione is an impulsive idiot who can't put two thoughts together without his help? And Ron is somehow "right" for abandoning Hermione because it was "too hard for him to listen to Hermione's parents pressure him to do the right thing?" Right, that's not weird at all. Your stories feel like masculine wish fulfilment, to be honest, because it somehow irritates you that Hermione is the clever one.

This reads like you're trying to take Hermione's brains and give them to harry. He's not stupid but he's not on her level, either intellectually or emotionally. He was mostly useless most of the time, so he'd have a lot of catching up to do now. Clearly you have issues with Hermione's brilliance and Harry's less than...anything really. Eyeroll.

One nundu, one unspeakable.

Kind of catchy, don't ya think?

lol

She snuck into his mind and watched him have sex? That is such an invasion of trust. I hope he can forgive her for that.

Loved this story, especially since it had a concrete Harmony ending. You put a lot of thought and Easter Eggs into your work, it’s great