Reviews for Healing Hermione
diamondgalshell chapter 9 . 1/22/2022
She snuck into his mind and watched him have sex? That is such an invasion of trust. I hope he can forgive her for that.
SamMax chapter 10 . 11/17/2021
Loved this story, especially since it had a concrete Harmony ending. You put a lot of thought and Easter Eggs into your work, it’s great
Raeger chapter 10 . 11/8/2021
Solid fic all around, much enjoyed. That said, it felt a bit incomplete just ending the fic by offing all the bad guys, without consideration for the administrative resolution of the story.

Another minor critique would be that the revelation of whodunnit doesn't seem that self-evident in retrospect / doesn't have that 'aha' moment where all the clues suddenly make sense. IIRC the only thing pointing towards Malfoy and Nott was that small scene where Neville points out that if Harry died during the ritual, that duo would work to overturn all the legal reforms. That aside, it also wasn't really explained how Hermione's records were stolen from the hospital, or who did it - Proudfoot's diary pointed to a female healer, but that same scene also exonerated Proudfoot from being one of the perpetrators. Unless you were trying to show that yes it was that associate who took the records, but no it was done by Proudfoot as part of him trying to solve the case himself.
Raeger chapter 1 . 11/7/2021
Very strong first chapter.
Latarra chapter 10 . 9/9/2021
I enjoyed this.
Incantations7 chapter 10 . 9/5/2021
I enjoyed your take on cursing Hermione, and the fact that Harry wouldn’t even blink before saying yes to doing it is perfectly in character for him… And yes, Broomstick Flyer will be missed…

And while I’m mostly American, I do have family and such in Sweden, so I appreciate that someone has already made sure that your Swedish is correct…
rigger42 chapter 6 . 8/5/2021
I feel like Hermione needs to be the smart one and if she gets too bossy and competitive...that's a problem. Harry has experience.
rigger42 chapter 5 . 8/5/2021
Isn't she a huge security risk right now? I'm surprised he allows her access before she can close her mind.
rigger42 chapter 3 . 8/5/2021
I adore the comment about recoil. The casual use of violence - those schoolyard jinxes cause humiliation and PAIN - is really disconcerting. the stinging hex seems more a ruler across knuckles than a nudge.
VoldiesBedroomSlippers chapter 10 . 8/5/2021
Excellent story. Thank you.
riversgirl75 chapter 3 . 7/31/2021
I have to say, I never thought of it before, but I side with Hermione’s mom here. The relationship is abusive if it involves hexing one another. Harry’s explanation of the difference is sound. And he would agree: he was abused (in various ways) by his Muggle relatives. I don’t see him tolerating hexes any better than punches.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/11/2021
I always see The Last Chance recommended but I have to say I have such a soft spot for this one. I love your fics, but this is definitely my favorite. Super underrated. I would say this jump started my thirst for more Unspeakable!Harry or Unspeakable!Harmony fics. It just fits them so well.
bulldream chapter 6 . 5/23/2021
dumbass there's a lot of lemons on this site
Renzo7 chapter 10 . 5/7/2021
Awesome story! I greatly enjoyed your characters and writing style.
Hinate chapter 10 . 4/29/2021
Harry Hermione forever...
one of the best hhr fanfic... just loved it...
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