Reviews for Naruto, the White Emperor
Tojiro Murakami chapter 7 . 6/7
You have a good story, but can you please spell check your work more. There are some sentences that keep catching me off guard whenever I have to puzzle what you meant to write.
DukeSomerset chapter 3 . 5/2
so the fact that it says in the summary OC 'Female' Peerage is to ignored?
Nise no kishi chapter 9 . 4/29
First of all do not say it is an OC peerage OC stands for original character not characters from another anime. Next work on your fluency and word choice overall it is good but make some adjustments
reptoholic chapter 12 . 2/11
Loving the story so far
reptoholic chapter 11 . 2/11
Keep it up! I hope he gets all of vali's team!
reptoholic chapter 10 . 2/11
Glad you are not adding that pairing. I just REALLY hope naruto ALWAYS stays ahead of issei
reptoholic chapter 9 . 2/11
Love it
reptoholic chapter 8 . 2/11
Wow, interesting
reptoholic chapter 7 . 2/11
I am looking forward to reading more
reptoholic chapter 6 . 2/11
I hope she learns to use Ice like in sekirei. I do wonder if she will have a sacred gear or the longinus. I am reall hoping you have a female george or another logninus user join him.
reptoholic chapter 5 . 2/11
reptoholic chapter 4 . 2/11
Great job
reptoholic chapter 3 . 2/11
reptoholic chapter 2 . 2/11
Awesome! I wonder if he Also has his parents pieces? what happened to them?
reptoholic chapter 1 . 2/11
hope he gets strong. this story has a lot of potential
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