Reviews for Samsaric |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading your story so much, i just hope that she trusts more people with her secret, she’ll get more help that way for her plans. Hope to read the next chapter soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Came back to read this story after a couple years and I am going to be dropping it again. Having her say she is going to be a ninja and then getting access to training material then flipping oit is stupid. That and constant panic attacks are exhausting and honestly annoying to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have an excellent story. I’ve been binge reading it the last couple of days. I can’t wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao Shikamaru's getting redpilled hard courtesy of our girl Sophie |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1-year-old Mirai: I want to be a shinobi 2-year-old Mirai: I want to start training Hokage: Sure, here are tools you might like (gives her access to library) Mira: How dare you, you are trying to push me into being a tool! Honestly... what? Also, the entire Kurama thing was completely horrible. Sorry, but it was the most balanced combination I have ever seen of entirely unbelievable and completely infuriating. Additionally, why did Minato die? This is a common thing in stories of Naruto's twin. Minato died sealing Kurama. If here he didn't seal Kurama in himself, what killed him then? |
![]() ![]() what a load of bullshit. No dual natures? Sasuke is canonically lightning and fire natured and dual natures show on chakra paper. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is that a reference form “Get over it” the game? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Feels a bit strange when there are Japanese words interspersed with English ones. Other than that, I like the writing style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it took me a couple of tries to get into the story but damn was it good when i finally got into it i shall watch this story with great interest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, the constant panic attacks get old really quick. I'm not saying they're warranted due to the situation but you've been having her break down every single chapter (probably. i'm not sure but it feels like it.) By now it is just tiring and trite to see her cry and break down. I know it's realistic for someone in her situation to freak out every other day but it is realistic the same way as it is her need to pee and poop every day. Would you write about peeing a shitting every single time it happens? no. Your problem is that you exhausted your chances to write about her mental condition and make it enjoyable. Now it's just tiring. Boring. I know there are many people that don't mind and even like these scenes but that doesn't change the fact that they're less meaningful. And these scenes are in fact not too bad when you look at them separately. It's just a shame that there are so fuckin many of them. You should think of every kind of scene as ammunition you have and make each one of them count. You've wasted many of your 'drama-bullets' TL;DR: i'm just ranting about how much of a little bitch the MC is. Make her man up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am soòooo happy you're back this is great love the chapter sorry to hear about the arthritis though i hear hot wax can help My grandmother she this kind of tub where she put wax in it and it keep warm but not too hot and while its liquid she puts her and in there and it helps with the painv |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so good can’t wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see this back. I'm ashamed to admit that I forgot a good bit of the plot and character development... Perhaps I should give it a reread at some point. ~Drunk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! Thought this was abandoned so pleasant surprise, this was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sadly this looks abandoned but it was really good,. Even tho it was slow |