Reviews for Retribution
Passion Angel chapter 13 . 6/9/2003
I just finished reading this entire series and I have to say I really enjoyed all of the stories. I hope that you aren't finished with Luc yet. It's too bad Angel had to die though b/c he is my favorite character in the Buffyverse. Maybe if you decide you want to kill Luc off in another story Angel could somehow come back human and stake his "son" himself.
lonely Brit chapter 13 . 4/8/2003
Ah, I've been away awhile, and in doing so I almost missed your latest offering.

Well thank heavens I didn't :)

Wonderful story, everything was neatly tied up, we got to see the Watchers Council again, as well as Luc of course - always a delight.

I do see your problem with the 'Angel Fanfic' classification, considering you have now wiped out the entire A.I. crew.

Still...the past could be fun. Or of couse there's the endless confusion of alternate universes, vengences wishes and stuff.

Thanks for a wonderful read!
Imzadi chapter 13 . 4/5/2003
Again, truly remarkable. To have ended on a sad note for Buffy (perhaps one day she & Mike might meet again) and a bittersweet one for Luc is just the right touch. I offer you a standing ovation!

Perhaps for your next project, a Lindsey story?
Imzadi chapter 12 . 4/3/2003
Oh, wow! I am stunned! I am speechless! I am totally in awe of you, Eledhwen. How wonderful! You are absolutely brilliant. These stories should be put together into a book and published. You've captured Luc so well. I feel his pain and his grief. Is this the end? I hope not. Whom did he call? Will there be more to this story or a new series? You have made my morning, my dear. Thank you!
Dlgood chapter 12 . 4/2/2003
That chapter was brief, but it wasn't cheap.

I'm curious to see where you take this from here. Is Luc going to go off to grieve, or is he going to seek revenge for Angelus' death. With Spike, Darla, and Angelus gone - Luc is truly on his own again. Although Dru might be out there somewhere. How will he handle it?

And with Buffy, where will she go now. Will Buffy and Giles stay in England to deal with the council and hunt Luc - or will she have to return to guard the Hellmouth? How will she handle her grief?

You set up an interesting structure, where you've alternated chapters, parallelling Luc and the vampires with Buffy and the watchers. Are you going to stay with that or go in a different direction. I'm torn between wanting to know what happens with Buffy and the regular cast, and your OC's. Mike and Luc are wonderful characters.
Imzadi chapter 11 . 3/27/2003
I can't believe you dusted both Spike & Darla! Angelus is truly, truly evil. For all I care, you can kill him. After all, he is evil and Buffy is on the side of good. Why not have Luc turn her and make her his wife (mistress?)? They'd be a great vampire couple! Or do you forsee Buffy/Mike? Anyway, keep her, kill him!
Dlgood chapter 11 . 3/26/2003
That was yet another riveting chapter.

Darla and Spike are both gone. At this point, I can't root against Buffy. She's been doing the right thing. I understand that this is under the 'Angel Category' and that killing him off severely reduces your list of villains, but I think it's time for him to go.

If you are keepind Luc on board, I'm not sure how Angelus can keep adding to the story, whereas I think you have tons of great opportunities with Buffy, Giles, Mike and the council.

And given the recent history, I don't think anyone could really rely on a re-souled Angel ever again. So I'm saddened. I really wanted to see if there were hidden depths to Angelus' feelings toward Buffy - but he's got to go.

And staked in the back by Mike, while fighting Buffy. A pretty good way for him to go. That way Buffy will never be certain whether she could have done it on her own (without the fate of the world in the balance) so it gives her something extra angsty to live with besides Angel's demise.
Lita of Jupiter chapter 11 . 3/26/2003
I want Angelus to live...

anyone else may die to ...

exepct Kaite...

I didn\t want darla to die...

make a ritual to bring her back


oh yes... Buffy die and so does Daniel...

Angelus and Luc coud get kaite to raise her

so afterwards she can be turned as a sort of

special revenge against the ones that killed Darla...

shame that Spike is gone...
Imzadi chapter 10 . 3/19/2003
Very good. The thought of that poor little Katie in the hands of Angelus & Darla is horrifying. You've done Spike quite well this chapter. Excellent as usual.
Lita of Jupiter chapter 10 . 3/18/2003



ureshii desu!

buffy gonna die...

Imzadi chapter 9 . 3/13/2003
So Luc has a soft heart when it comes to Katie? How sweet! I've always liked him, vampire or not. Good chapter, Eledhwen.
Imzadi chapter 8 . 3/11/2003
Good chapter, Eledhwen. I liked the idea of the demon coffee bar, and I loved Giles telling Quentin Travis off. I'm wondering just what the Buffy/Spike situation was at this time. Was it before they got "horizontal" with each other?
Dlgood chapter 6 . 3/5/2003
Another great chapter. I like scenarios where Buffy demonstrates her competence and leadership skills. I look forward to seeing the council having it's eyes opened. Hopefully, Buffy and Giles will show why the council ought to be working for the slayer and not the other way around.

I also like the way you keep the personalities fresh. Steven's "slayer worship". Buffy's disappointment at not getting to see London.

It'll be interesting to see how the fanged foursome react to Buffy's presence in England. Keep the good stuff coming.
Imzadi chapter 6 . 3/5/2003
Way to go, Eledhwen! Buffy is sticking it to Quentin and the Council. Good writing. I am so happy to see these updates coming so quickly! You are making my days!
Lita of Jupiter chapter 6 . 3/5/2003
Are you planning on alternating

between the vamps and the "rest"

every chapter?

I'm Glad Buffy arrived now

the can KILL her!

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