Reviews for Persian
Caboose.RvB343 chapter 22 . 5/10
I’ve not really been a person to talk about the short comings of what people write but if this is supposed to be a pyrrah and jaune switch it really isn’t. I’ve been thinking about this ever since he nearly lost to yang in his first fight and now loseing to Weiss it just wouldn’t happen.
merendinoemiliano chapter 11 . 5/9
See you soon.
merendinoemiliano chapter 29 . 5/9
Glad to hear from you already. A very nice and lovely chapter, i loved these interactions and i really can't wait to see the dance, all charachters are such badass sweetheart. Regarding Ruby's date, i can send you an oc i created some time ago, but make as you wish.
merendinoemiliano chapter 28 . 4/11
I'm glad you came back, this was a very badass fight and i'm very happy you made this version of Pyhrra more realistic than canon!Jaune(in the sense, here she has at the very least a basic training and knowledge about Aura), if she continues to train and update her equipment, she could eventually become even stronger than her canon self. I can't wait to see next chapters, keep up the good work and see you soon, i'm also free for advices about lore and whathever you need. By the way, Sunday was my birthday and i consider the chapter your gift.
yomunot chapter 14 . 1/27
This chapter had was written pretty oddly. It kept switching between third person and first person within paragraphs, the flow kept being broken because of that? Also did you change Nora's semblance from electricity absorbtion to super strength? Or is Nora just havin a laugh?
yomunot chapter 11 . 1/27
ohoho she snapped
yomunot chapter 1 . 1/27
Every time I read Pyrrhas dialogue my mind gives her a scottish accent XD
merendinoemiliano chapter 27 . 1/26
Pretty good chapter. I'm glad thath,despite being truly a knight in shining armor here, your Jaune isn't totally perfect and has still his flaws.I can't wait to see next chapters and whath you will do with Amber(maybe Ozpin will make the propose to Blake or Weiss this time?).Aniway, keep up the good work and see you later, i also hope you had a good Christmas and will have a great year.
merendinoemiliano chapter 26 . 12/8/2017
Not bad, i'm curious to see who will go to the dance with Ruby(i'll feel slightly jealous, she's my waifu). Keep up the good work and see you later.
ThornedRose367 chapter 25 . 11/13/2017
So good hey, is this the end?
IshipLancaster chapter 15 . 11/12/2017
It's really good
ThornedRose367 chapter 14 . 11/12/2017
Daaaaaaaaaaammmmmnnnnn so good (for all chapters so far)
merendinoemiliano chapter 25 . 11/2/2017
Not bad chapter. Keep up the good work and see you later.
Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 24 . 10/4/2017
Cause blakey lookey cutey with out her bowey
merendinoemiliano chapter 24 . 10/3/2017
Nice and funny chapter (loved zwei). Keep up the good work and see you later.
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