Reviews for Innocence Lost
archangelazraelson chapter 2 . 3/24
ur muse may hve goldfish span but can always whip muse into shape with a reward type deal of more chapters on this then work on something else for a bit?
bb1028 chapter 2 . 3/24
This is fantastic. It would be great to see more of it some day
private.emkay chapter 2 . 1/11
Damn, another good story without continuation!?
KayBiJay chapter 1 . 10/4/2023
I almost want to be mad at you for creating such cool story and then leaving it like that
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2023
Could you at least let us know are still active or not. If not, put the stories up for adoption or something. Most are too good to be left unfinished.
Duchess67 chapter 2 . 9/15/2022
*shriek* Please tell me you have more of this one somewhere? It is an amazingly unique storyline that I haven't seen before and would be thrilled if it was continued. And it's awesome!
johnny99 chapter 2 . 8/17/2022
Really awesome story, thanks for writing as I really enjoyed it.
WildOnionTops chapter 2 . 6/9/2022
Loved first two chapter. Afraid it is not being continued which is a shame.
Jo Cook chapter 1 . 3/12/2022
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 2 . 2/14/2022
hope you add more one day its really good
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 1 . 2/14/2022
great chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 1/18/2022
I love this story and I really hope it updates again someday.
Bolton101 chapter 2 . 12/13/2021
A spectacular story
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 1 . 10/26/2021
What they are doing is wrong is wrong and immoral and illegal. I along with others with the same view as me would make an order that what they are planning would result in an automatic death penalty that is. Yes I mean just that I would put every single one of those people to death Sadly in the real would their are people how do just that in real world my grandfather was aware of this bullshit from his time before retirement and he wasn't happy and told me if he had his way he would have had all of the scientists and soldiers involved in this crap but to death. And thing these effing assholes also don't seem to realize is that they are going state to hell upon death. Many humans never seem to learn from the past history. Mess with The laws of nature set my The Heavenly Father whom is
our creator and many of these assholes are atheists who believe they can do what ever they want Treat people as weapons is wrong.

So better put every single member of these criminals to death along with everyone who is financing this illegal bullshit. Genetic engineering is illegal science is fine but done within the rules laws of God. I look forward to the day when every single criminal asshole is out to death And with that Yahweh/YaHoWaH/YHWH.

I am really disgusted that many authors refuse to learn that their are laws commandments that no human can disobey because The laws of our creator means death. In fact in the Book of Enoch it even talks about this kind of shit going on pre global flood. Which all of the illegal crap back then with is like what is going on now resulted in the Flood. And when it comes to the Dursleys because of what they let happen to Harry so need to have everything taken away and that includes their freedom for the rest of their life to think about what they did wrong. And As said I want all of these criminal immoral asshole put to death. Anyway who is against the death penalty is an stupid idiot. After all it was not us humans who initiated the death penalty if was Our heavenly father and he said the wages of sin is death. Sin is disobedience which in many cases is also criminal activities and behavior. And in Scripture it talks about last days prophecy which indicates that a large portion of The population will be put to death because they refuse to acknowledge what they have been doing is wrong evil. As for Sarah in this story she is starting to see 2gatv4gey are doing is wrong but yet she should have realized this from the very beginning but she did not. This is why I also believe that spiritual worship services should be mandatory because one of the things it teaches is right from wrong and includes historical events and try he consequences of wrongful behavior and the rewards of doing what is right and obedience.

And altering Harry's genetics Turing him into a mutant. And Harry genetics are that of a magic user. Known as Homo-Magi. And in many was Albus is also guilty for what happened to Harry Placing Harry with the Dursleys. If they want Harry to be placed with anyone and be raised in the mundane world then he should have been placed with The Tonks or Even with the Royal Family they would never allowed this if anything the Minute Elizabeth learned. about about these people she would have ordered the program shut down and everyone excited. After all because of her oath she took she has to obey to obey the Laws of God. And she knows what the consequences are if she does not.

The Wizarding World needs a massive cleansing and reforms and the same goes for the Mundane World as well with most of the immoral law breaking garbage put to death.

Plus something stupid shithead of a headmaster need to learn is to obey Potters when it came to their will(s) because they planned ahead in case something happen and most likely may have been given a sneak peak as to what might happen but no thanks to that old aged asshole if happened when it could have been avoided if he would have just obeyed. At least Vernon died and for what he did he got what he deserved. With this being A.U. I would like to see a viewing portal so as to show that fat Walrus in hell.

Any way it has been four years since the last update.
fhippogriff chapter 2 . 8/19/2021
If you add to this story, I'll gladly read it!
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