Reviews for The Unexpected Turnabout |
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Brock's Geodude chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 Needs a little proofreading, but cute. :) There are also a few times in which they both speak in the same paragraph, but there should only be one speaker per paragraph. Very cute though. |
L0ly-pop chapter 1 . 1/15/2017 Definitely fluffy and lovey. Loved it~ |