|Reviews for The Unexpected Turnabout|
| Brock's Geodude chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
Needs a little proofreading, but cute. :) There are also a few times in which they both speak in the same paragraph, but there should only be one speaker per paragraph. Very cute though.
| L0ly-pop chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
Definitely fluffy and lovey. Loved it~