|Reviews for Save Me|
| Jackie Krieger chapter 1 . 11/14/2017
| Yari Cullen Kuroo chapter 16 . 9/16/2017
OMG! I lOOOOOVED this one sooooo much!
I just fell for Stan ten times harder *.* he was so adorable in this story, and so hot defending Kyle, knocking out the others, damn!
I imagined that Cartman had feelings for Stand before the kiss, but I loved that twist!
And Kenny hahahaha he is always the womanizer hahahahahaha
| StansGirl512 chapter 16 . 2/4/2017
Cute story. I love your work!
| KWriter in Training chapter 15 . 2/3/2017
I always love it when Stan gets all badass. He's so cool when he's fighting for the ones he loves. c:
I understand what Kyle meant by not wanting to be the victim but to be honest, what could he do? I doubt he's strong enough to knock them out like Stan did and Kyle doesn't sound like he wants anyone else involved.
Kenny sounds so clueless it's kinda funny. I can just imagine him just thinking what the fuck is going on
| ric122-inactive chapter 1 . 2/2/2017
Hello I'm looking for boys to put in my white van.
| KWriter in Training chapter 14 . 1/28/2017
What the fuck Cartman? You fell in love with someone and this is your way of showing it? Dude, that's pretty fucked up right there.
It's a good thing he didn't try to hide it from Kyle, I'm so sick of those cliches and it never makes things easier than it is to just say it.
| KWriter in Training chapter 13 . 1/28/2017
I wish I had more to say about this chapter other than well shit 0.0
I mean the fact that it's up on a porn site is pretty fucked up, it's child porn by law. so fucked up...
Stan's family's reaction is pretty justified, I'm not saying it's the best response but if you found out about your kid's sexual orientation through a porn site, I'd be freaking out too.
By the way, how did Randy come across the video anyway? XD
| KWriter in Training chapter 12 . 1/28/2017
"I wasn't thinking. That's the part of the problem. I am a horny fucking teenager. What did they expect?" That's the best line in the story so far, well done my friend XD
I really hate seeing them so hurt, especially Kyle. I can't begin to imagine how he must feel. Stan sounds like he's ready to beat the shit out of anyone who make the next comment about the video
| KWriter in Training chapter 11 . 1/28/2017
Cartman sounds like something died and got stuck up his ass. He's being more of a dick than usual to Stan and Kyle.
People really need to mind their own fucking business. Someone's locker got vandalized and all you care about is if he's gay? even if he is, what's it to you people? I hate people like that -.-
| KWriter in Training chapter 10 . 1/28/2017
Aww, their date sounds so adorable. They acts like best friends who are trying to push the limits of what they can get away with cx
Spontaneous dates sound like an interesting idea, but I don't think it's spontaneous if you already planned for a date.
| KWriter in Training chapter 9 . 1/28/2017
A date, that sounds nice c:
Kyle sounds so adorable in this story, I just wanna hug him.
I disagree, Kenny. A car would be so much more trouble since you have to deal with driving through traffic.
Cartman, for all the shit you pulled, I wouldn't ever talk to you again either
| KWriter in Training chapter 8 . 1/28/2017
Yay, romance XD
Yup, Stan. Kyle can be pretty difficult but if anyone could deal with him, it's you. Stan sounds like he's working out his entire future with him including future dates cx
| KWriter in Training chapter 7 . 1/28/2017
Really Stan?! You could have just said, "it's not experimental, I love you."
Kyle, Stan is flirting with you. Albeit a lot of subtle than how Stan usually is but still he's flirting. I can tell Kyle likes the attention but hates the thought that he didn't stand a chance to be with Stan.
But ironically enough, for all the shit I keep saying about your sex scenes being spontaneous, this is probably one of the ones that aren't. Both of them do have established feelings for each other that they have thought about. It's not rushing in if they have been wanting it for a while c:
| KWriter in Training chapter 6 . 1/28/2017
Aww, Kyle's making Stan sound like his guardian angel. A guardian angel who gets him in half the trouble he's in but still cx
They sounds so sweet and I can't believe Stan read so much of Kyle's journal.
Shelia is pretty overbearing and it makes sense that she would do this to Kyle but I hate that it does.
| KWriter in Training chapter 5 . 1/28/2017
Seems like Kyle's still got a little paranoia about cars since he held onto Stan when the bus hit a bump.
Stan, your feelings can't be anymore obvious at this point. Maybe you should do yourself a favor and admit it to yourself before you drive yourself crazy and actually do have to stay in there. XD
Like I said, Kenny as a sex manic. Not hard to imagine.
I wonder what Rebecca is doing in here. She has an aid so it must be pretty serious to need constant surveillance