Reviews for AWOL |
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![]() ![]() I’m going to guess that this is discontinued because its been several years, but I really loved the story and plot! I thought that the writing was really good and appreciate the time and effort that was put into this. Thank you so much for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, I cannot believe how much I've missed! I'm so, so sorry, dalekchung! I've been away from ffnet for a while, and haven't checked my inbox in literal AGES, so I didn't see your updates before now. I'm so, so sorry! But, gods, the past chapters, the story so far...I have no words. Seeing as I've been away for so long, I decided to read from the beginning again, and BLOODY HELL, your writing takes my breath away. Honestly, it's PHENOMENAL. I just...I love this so much. The plot, the writing style, the undercurrents of emotions you imbue, the build-up and suspense, the way you portray the characters and their dynamics with each other (especially Lynx/Alex oh my heart)...EVERYTHING about this is absolutely amazing. Truly. Reading this really made my day. THANK YOU 3 I know it's been quite a while since you last updated this, but I really hope you continue this some day. I totally understand if you don't, but I really would love to see more. I'll always be grateful that you shared this with us, though - thank you, again 333 I also really, really hope that, despite the current world situation, that you are doing alright! 3 And I wish you and your family a happy new year and all the best for 2021! Thank you again 3 |
![]() ![]() -_-_-Ben couldn't lie and say that he sometimes resented the younger man. He couldn't even walk through MI6 without someone pointing him out to a new recruit, whispering, "that guy, right there—that's Agent Rider's partner." But, for all that it was worth, he loved Alex too. The teen was like a younger brother to him, although he had never had one. Even though Alex was the senior agent, Ben had always felt a fierce need to protect the younger man, right up until his disappearance and even past then.-_-_-_- Why does that give me John and ASH vibes |
![]() ![]() As an NCIS geek, the name Ducky is totally making think of Dr Mallard |
![]() ![]() "The Doctor grinned the grin he'd learned from Captain Jack." Even though both David Tennant and Christopher Eccleston had it from the moment they first appeared. |
![]() ![]() When she first met him, she was sarcastic. But not when she became a full-time companion. Not to mention that the Doctor doesn't do things like blame the TARDIS, or react to others like that. |
![]() ![]() And really, Donna doesn't speak to the Doctor like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Thanks for the update. Good luck with your writing. Don’t feel rushed to write anything just write when it comes to you. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks so much for the update! I am really looking forward to seeing where this is going. |
![]() ![]() Seriously, if anyone else saves the day in Doctor Who, has the Doctor ever said "I could do better"? |
![]() ![]() Donna complains about not landing somewhere interesting, and the Doctor blames the TARDIS. Instead of saying why it IS interesting. |
![]() ![]() Because he doesn't influence what they see. |
![]() ![]() In Mummy On The Orient Express, the Doctor showed the physic paper to someone, and was then surprised by what they read on it. |
![]() ![]() Or at least, that's not how the Doctor uses it. |
![]() ![]() Was "definitely not a couple" deliberately put there by the Doctor? Because that's not how it works. |