Molly, I need your lungs. *helpless laughter* Brilliant! I think I love you, just for that.

It would have been easier if you have posted a link to the sequel I guess. Your story is really good and I am happy how you handle it situation without making Dumbledore like he is complete ass.

This story was an enjoyable read. I had never read a story like it, but really liked how you delivered it. I can picture Bones going after the Horocruxes and getting rid of Voldemort once and for all. Thank you for the story.

I read you blurb and thought how different could it be?
But damn... You were right
Definitely different from all the others which follow the same trope
Also pleasantly different from writers who add too many extra plots and oc people and what not
Very well written, despite not quoting the entire book, I could follow easily and didn't have to refer to canon text
I truly loved this reading!

Very nice.

The 'reading the book(s)' format provides a platform from which to comment on the books, exposing their various logic and plot failings. However, since all fan-fiction readers have (presumably) read the books or watched the movies, incorporating substantial portions of the text is unnecessary and rather boring. By keeping the quotes to the minimum necessary to provide context, this story successfully focuses on it's critique of the original story.

This was an enjoyable story. I appreciated that you paraphrase rather than copied most of the books. Thank you for writing this.

good story

Omg I found this on a reddit post and decided to read it and this is the best ”read the books” fanfic that I’ve ever read. Thank you for writing this and making it so interesting. Also you did not just quote the book which is something I really enjoyed. Thanks again!

I expect a sequel, if just to offer Bragman jelly babies. XD

How was that Troll being fed?

#5
Give her to the centaurs.

#4
Guillotine.

#3.
Feed her to a dragon.