WHERE THE FUCK IS BEST GIRL LUNA

Good story. I read this a long time ago but couldn't really remember it all that well. I like the way you wrote it too.

That's pretty damm great reaction here.

if i ever do this it going be how i read. i don't stop at every single second but when i just realized something big I write it down and wait till the end of the chapter.

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10/10

It just occurred to me now, but do you think maybe that Trelawny really has divined Harry dying many times and ways? I mean, the prophecy seems to be the only reason why he manages to survive when there really was no excuse for him not dying in nasty ways time and again. And we know she is a genuine seer. Or perhaps even his possession of the cloak to have screwed up her divination of his future. Especially if it really is connected to death, her seeing his death would be reasonable.

Anyone else realize that Harry cannot be told the prophecy (which would have been useless to Voldemort anyway) because his scar is a backdoor to Voldemort, yet they have no problem telling him the location of the Order’s headquarters and about Snape being a double agent?

Awesome job.

Second time reading this, and it's just as good as the first time :)

Wow, the anti-Snape bias is pretty strong here. It's kind of funny that Mcgonagall had the galls to accuse him of "going out of his way to be suspicious", biased, and not paying attention.

What was she saying about being prejudiced again? Isn't it funny how Albus always swung the house cup back to Gryphindor? And who was it that broke the rules and let a first year play for the Cup? And let go of his obvious rule-breaking? And who was it that dropped Harry off on a doorstep and ignored his being abused? Who was the one that hid that fact?

can you write a sequel to this? the fucker you link us too next chapter abandoned his story. but marked it complete to fuck with ppl who search for it. hoping to actually get a sequel

I love this story!

Very good. Definitely the best fic of this type I have seen.

I will say that you made some gross exaggerations with regards to the mistakes of some people. Many mistakes were perfectly defendable, yet the accused said all but the reasons that would have, at least partially, redeemed them.

Also, I was getting kinda frustrated with a few of the Hogwarts staff for sorta turning against each other. Like when Flitwick was interrogating McGonagall and pointing out all the flaws of her actions in front of everyone, including Umbridge and Fudge who were looking for ammunition. Same with Hermione at the end making it far worse for Dumbledore. This is how it felt:

Flitwick: "... then you were particularly harsh on Mr Longbottom".
McGonagall: "I was stressed at the time with all my duties".
Flitwick: "Then here you hardly provided adequate support for Mr Potter".
McGonagall: "As I said, I was particularly stressed at the time".
Umbridge: "I think this clearly shows that Professor McGonagall cannot handle all 3 positions. You are hereby removed from your post as Deputy Headmistress".
Everyone, INCLUDING FLITWICK: *Screams in protest*.

Like, why are you digging her a grave and then surprised when her enemy pushes her in?

Apart from those points, it was very enjoyable.