Awesomeness

you alive?

I love your story. Although fast paced and short, it is good to read.

please update

This! I need this!

Plot bunny: Louise is Sparky-Sparky-Boom-Man's ancestor!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON

I was walking around earlier today and thought to myself, "There's gotta be a fic of this right?". I was surprised to see that this was the only one (still active), and it was thankfully posted this year! I hope you continue this story, it seemed a little short and rushed for the first chapter, but I'd like to see where this goes! Keep it up!

this is actually REALLY genius! i cant wait to see where you'll go with this

I like this

Has potential can't wait for more

This is going great so far. I'd like to see more of it :D

So, she pulled Aang before he pulled a Captain America? I'm assuming this considering the opening chapter's note about Zuko having Katara as a sidekick to fight his dad for some reason (the OOC from the very start since he hadn't even begun the development leading to his turn, but as said in the note, doesn't matter because it's "not their story"). Well, nice going Louise, you've doomed an entire world to the Fire Nation by stealing Kung Fu Action Jesus. Possibly even more so because of the circumstances getting Yue to revive/become the Moon, I'd need to rewatch that to be sure beyond it certainly removing Iroh & Zuko since they tracked Aang up that way from the South. If they have Katara working with them (equally OOC for her due to the Fire Nation raids leaving the Southern Tribe a third world country hovel compared to the North's winter metropolis and the little detail of killing her mom) they'd be more busy jail breaking the imprisoned Waterbenders for both goodwill & reinforcements.

Speaking of the Moon, at first Aang is going to be relieved since he's somewhere that has never even heard of the Avatar and then crushingly guilty over the feeling of abandoning his duties as one. I say speaking of, because: aw crap, the spirits! Koh didn't take too kindly to Avatar Kuruk just letting the world handle itself even though it was peaceful during his time, Aang left right when the Air Nomads were being wiped out! The spirits are going to be ticked with the downward spiral the world is going in. And the world he got pulled into has elves that talk to them too! Plus other spirits that actually talk to others, like the water spirit trying to flood the world from the date-rape potion debacle early on.