Reviews for Saudade
Debbie Hicks chapter 32 . 11/4/2023
33. Epilogue 2.-Eemmett
then suddenly Both hunted then oh crap Aliens/Vulcans bitten them so the then Ate blood of both animal and extraterrestrials then See her Taken lives good Jane pain third Kidnapped now pets bitten best friends both/Young.
ones then Killed then beheaded then where you think you broken the law good used Electric therapy shooting then Erased memories, with both with them good they used Experimenting/augmenting. brain surgeries then jailed starved but nuked Freely burning them so them Punished serving time nuked blew good Blew them fled from to them reported of them broken down struggling rest arrested her/them good beheaded. bring them then torn freely burst each two Bitten freely.! then found hirer with him/them hunting chained screaming bonds brokered tore heads each Blew up brought their own good Broken the law good we successfully did it nuked Vampires wild into their forms good Burn them again see these Cheated diets again what not living see fourteen then Ashes. then Hordes of more undead but there each blown Hordes. then Both were broken so they are struggling gasp who did it top her/him/three Aro/them forced on them they can't die Alice they used from here Vulcan technology brainwashed rewired memories gasp oh my god nuked/Pierced/popped/sliced/Sliced vanished good Erased of history Forever burn them then Hordes of Vampires good these criminals are dead train them ours then too late never was alive nuked of both venomous blood supply drained shooting the brainwashed them to do it nuked Creations of the undead used them as Guards then too late soulless in their own way stolen forms of them nuked Hordes as all of them good tell them broken the rule of the Vampire world then too late they gathered witnesses from as all of them nuked Freely Shattering the brought there see the Criminals broken the law then Sentence death then last thoughts turn heads ripped it's done to around the world's with both good Atomizing/vaporizing then burning to as all of them Hordes as all of more monstrously of Vampires good we declared it a ball of Victory as all of them nuked but More Monstrously then Alice you ok adapt ow watch it good god Woman what is it they caused it to supernatural memories wiped cleansed never returned had newest ones nice haircuts very funny gasp oh my god they are all of them coming who them they want us/them nuked Smashed with each two vanished good deceased then it was gone as all of Vampires see this vanished blown as all of creations then it was too late nuked of them poisoned of deadly blood ashes hordes of them vanished in homes good are breeders goof they are mating as we speak what finally they are not there as all of them too late nice shag what this teenaged Ocampa ears are pointed slanted eyebrows they did it in rings of curls and swirls in twin each pairs oh my god mind melding me cured me they is way she was kept so he/them oh no used their powers nuked freely burst Vampires nuked of her burned blood is an ordained priestess made a Vulcan acolyte it's deadly but poisonous oh my god they are all Angry with as all of Them Now joined us/them to final/last ones then nuked Smashed vanished good Vampires then nuked creations vanished good loss of then good what not humans good more of them as all of them blown up Train them there they all of them good of her/her/him/them never existed again see dead then then it happened herself broken down suffering from it acting like Empress Wanghong from the Last Emperor Alice oh no they did it they are what adapted I am, fine ugh my head is really killing me clad from here was her best dress but grown like this hair was styled from help but I Need to smoke badly Pain is illogical gasp but used E-Smokers to ease my problems gasp she smokes but she used a very harsher but More sharp but Heavy powerful Mandarin Chinese movie accent like a Chinese Actress good god man sorry she is busy again almighty Woman you look great it is for Vampire wives he was in a suit did from here in a Campground the newspapers from China slapped the more but disbelieved shocked prime minster almost got a Coronary prepared to pass out in shock she is a reincarnation of our last heavenly Empress so he a reincarnation of our heavenly great Last Emperor with them in these clothes from the NASA Bodysuits it was a hot movie rumor from Jessica it's working yes she was studying it for centuries then they read it again it changed like Back to the Future were special photos the child poked from here.
rjh1960 chapter 30 . 10/29/2023
I had a feeling something bad was going to happen. but all's well that end's well. They get their HEA and Bella gets the sweetest husband.
rjh1960 chapter 29 . 10/29/2023
This is a really sweet story. I like the format of listing the months and knowing what to expect. I had some fears several chapters back about James and his gang, but was happy to read it was an old, already managed problem.
I also love how some things changed but remained similar ie: Charlie bought the new car stereo.
This story is such a nice change from the usual. I love this more mature Bella and Edward. I'm especially happy for Sam and Leah to have their HEA.
Now I'm just worried the will be a complication before Bella becomes a vampire. But maybe there won't be? No uterus no baby. Jacob has been managed, Volturi not mentioned at all. Hmm, maybe smooth sailing for these two?
rjh1960 chapter 22 . 10/28/2023
Just found this story, not sure how I missed it. It's always such a thrill for me to find a new story. These two are really sweet. I like this Bella and her relationship with her family. I'm also glad that she and Edward are well matched ie: it's not taboo, as far as Forks is concerned they are the same age.
SianJohn chapter 32 . 6/2/2023
I've just reread this wonderful story, thanks again for sharing it with us. I love it.
abbyweyr chapter 32 . 1/18/2023
nice to read Rosalie's POV and her process to do what she had to do.
abbyweyr chapter 31 . 1/18/2023
Nice way to end. Thanks for sharing. Good version with canon things nicely weaved into your story.
abbyweyr chapter 30 . 1/18/2023
Nice to read Edward's POV. Edward is going to have another reason to favor mountain lions.
abbyweyr chapter 29 . 1/18/2023
nice Christmas presents
abbyweyr chapter 28 . 1/18/2023
good for Bella standing up to jacob. Maybe Rosalie is warming up to her. That was interesting Thanksgiving day.
abbyweyr chapter 27 . 1/18/2023
the aches and pains from her klutzy life would be a good reason. nice way to keep memories.
abbyweyr chapter 26 . 1/18/2023
nice agreement. nice job change.
abbyweyr chapter 25 . 1/18/2023
nice way to invite your boyfriend to move in with you. quit job?
abbyweyr chapter 24 . 1/18/2023
that's one way to get around the wolf triangle. happy for Leah.
abbyweyr chapter 23 . 1/18/2023
gossip got around to the students and Charlie. Rosalie a bit outspoken. Seems Bella won't be having change me discussion with Edward.
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