Reviews for Just a Normal Coffee Shop
Noi4290 chapter 26 . 5/2/2020
I know I’m a bit late to the party, but this was really clever and well written and I really enjoyed it. Thank you author.
123crossfire chapter 3 . 6/6/2018
Blueberrypietree chapter 26 . 3/9/2018
It's really over, isn't it? ;-;

Aww, well, it has been a fun ride. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this amazing fanfiction, I'm looking forward to more of these kinds of works from you all.
Guest chapter 26 . 3/5/2018
Ok im going to starbucks
Indyboo102 chapter 1 . 3/5/2018
I loved this I hope you continue writing story just as good.
jasongd chapter 26 . 3/5/2018
Great story great chapter and great ending congrats
Kraven the Hunter chapter 26 . 3/5/2018
I add this to my alerts, and the very next day you post the final chapter. My stars.

Also, I’m pretty sure if Garnet rooted herself in the room, nothing short of Opal could budge her.

Well, it’s been a fun ride.
Kraven the Hunter chapter 25 . 3/4/2018
I like the idea of releasing Bismuth on parole. There will be conditions, of course. #1: No attempting to harm Steven or any other human, directly or indirectly. #2: No more Breaking Points. Ever.

And it's okay to be open with your feelings about Bismuth, Garnet. She was one of your oldest friends, one of the few to make it out of the war with her sanity intact. It must have been heartbreaking to learn the truth of why she disappeared for thousands of years.

Cool, Pearl's finally calling her! Maybe we'll finally find out what the "S" stands for.

Well, it's been a long time coming, but you don't seem to be finished yet, so...Follow
Kraven the Hunter chapter 24 . 3/3/2018
"You don't need to worry about Connie anymore, Mrs. Dr. Maheswaran. She was only in danger because she went in my mom's room, and I'm never opening the door to that room again."

Seriously though, I wouldn't be surprised if Steven is bearing some guilt he hasn't revealed yet.

I understand their concern, but it's really not a good idea to separate Connie and the Gems, especially not Steven. They've just been through a potentially traumatic incident, and they need each other for emotional support. You can't exactly expect Connie to explain to some child counselor how her best friend's mom's magical supercomputer room brainwashed her and nearly caused her to die of thirst, can you?

Besides, like Connie says, it is a little underhanded to talk about the Rock Moms behind their backs.
Kraven the Hunter chapter 23 . 3/2/2018
When they can't even fit it in the Cheeseburger backpack, they really have overpacked.

And really, the problem wasn't Peridot's programming. I'm sure every line of code was double and triple-checked. The only problem was that the room is basically a giant computer, and computers don't think like people. They think "make sure everybody is happy" means "reprogram or delete anyone who isn't".

You know, I like to think that Rose left an impression of herself behind in her room, like a footprint in the sand. If so, perhaps she helped make sure it didn't choose "delete".

The long road to recovery has begun.
Kraven the Hunter chapter 20 . 2/27/2018
That's right, Alexandrite ain't having none of this crap.

Just in the nick of time. I don't think the Jam Buds could have lasted much longer.
Kraven the Hunter chapter 15 . 2/27/2018
So, unless I miss my guess, the simulation just created a doppelganger Peridot to substitute until the original regenerated.

And not only is Lapis trapped AGAIN, she's now been cast as the girl with IBS. That is just adding insult to injury.

Don't think I didn't see what you did with the drinks on that menu.
Kraven the Hunter chapter 9 . 2/26/2018
Dang it, Peridot, couldn't you have at least made it so that only registered users could affect the simulation?

Still, the fact that she was able to affect the functionality of the room is pretty impressive.

I'm going to assume this is pre-Pink Lars.
Kraven the Hunter chapter 12 . 2/26/2018
Okay, now Garnet's figured things out, that only leaves...Actually, I forget how many others are in this crazy room.

Might want to speed-dial an ambulance when they get out. Connie and Steven are going to be VERY exhausted.
Drunken Hamster chapter 25 . 2/26/2018

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