Reviews for Jaune Ryu-Long, the Dragon Contractor
Jake Ryan chapter 1 . 6/25/2021
Hey my guy I’ve been following this story since like chapter 11 man is the story abandoned or cause Ive just been checking on it every couple months just waiting for an update
TitanRedXx1 chapter 4 . 6/14/2021
Weiss and Winter probably would've defended him but whatever
Guest chapter 36 . 5/5/2021
oh shit. Well, bye bye Whitley
Guest chapter 66 . 3/23/2021
Me gustan muchos tus historias, seguirás escribiendolas?
Guest chapter 66 . 3/10/2021
Please continue this
Jake Ryan chapter 66 . 3/2/2021
Dude this story’s awesome I’ve been following it for quite a while and I still check up on it every now and again to see if there’s been an update so I’m exited to see where this goes he’ll I remember when updates were weekly and I’d read them the second they came out any way man just saying your doing good
Machsticc chapter 26 . 2/23/2021
I'm Australian...I can't take the word "mate" seriously
AlucardInverse chapter 1 . 1/31/2021
Man, I have to say, I've just read the first chapter and can say for certain that Vlad is as stupid as one of those sect leaders from Chinese novels and he'd probably be a pain in the ass.
qrowbrawn chapter 13 . 1/16/2021
run b**th ruuuuuun!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2021
Lung Wang xDDD
NOBLE chapter 66 . 12/31/2020
Vaya que trágico dejar una buena historia tirada ala basura ojalá algún día puedas seguir la historia si ocupas fondos podemos donar
Mr.Bougainvillea chapter 4 . 12/17/2020
Does that mean there's a oossibility of Winter being a mate?
GeraltRex chapter 66 . 11/19/2020
This is a good story, I loved reading it and I hope that you can continue it. If you are having issues with timeline events, I would suggest writing out all the events that you want to take place in your docs and then organize them to where they would fit in your timeline. If the problem has become that you have a ton of events plans for your story, focus on a single one at a time and then work on coinciding them with the time of other events.
Cadmus8 chapter 4 . 11/14/2020
Reading Jaune say his lines feel 's more of an informal but sometimes shy type of person. (Even if he gets raised by dragons in this fic. And even then, those dragon's speech patterns are pretty informal) instead of writing
"Aided" and "Such words are unbecoming of a lady", you should write "Helped" and "Saying words like those ruin your 'perfect girl' image"

It just feels more natural. Jaune just isn't the type to use fancy words.
Cadmus8 chapter 3 . 11/14/2020
The story and the whole premise is actually pretty good. But it would do you good to make your writing style more... I think "subtle" would be the best word here. If you could weave your words better, then you'll be golden.

Then again, this is just the 3rd chapter out of 66. So you've probably improved by leaps and bounds later on.
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