That was metal af. More!

Niceeeee

I would greatly appreciate it if you would hurry up and update

You lost me at multipairing.
Well wishes and see ya.

They're fucked

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon..

Okay seriously the Greyjoys and the Freys are so bad they literally have no reason to be alive so Ned remains a dumbass. Their entire culture is based on raping people for god’s sake. Kill them all!

Honestly I don’t mind Harry having all of his magic because otherwise they’d just have this house of 8000 history go extinct which is really sad

Well thankfully his magic protected him enough to put him in a magical coma instead of outright killing him

And yeah this is why fostering the sons of your enemies is a very very bad idea!

I can't wait for more my only complaint is the nerfing of Harry it's far to common to "balance" the story better to lean into the power than try to shy away in my opinion there are better ways to balance a story then nerfing a character or a portion of them. Besides that it's a great story I hope to read more and I hope you stop nerfing harry and his magic unless your planning to make his wandless magic like a muscle and it will grow in strength and he in stamina the more he uses it. Sorry I'm rambling now looking forward to more soon.

Tftc

Tftc good job

At least save his soldiers so they kill the Freys?! They were outside so they can come and kill every Frey they want. That is that they had to do in canon.

Love your story loved how you changed it but kept some things the same. It is wonderful.

Thanks for the chapter!