Reviews for The Ritual
ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
very cool one-shot! pretty fun. i may have liked to see more detail though ;P
Alex2909 chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
nice story idea
KarisTasogare chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
interesting, thou I have to dmit I was expectimg Hermione to say she 'had' a confiscated test sample of something the twins came up with. (perhaps a polyjuice derivitiive, that was intended a persons sexual attractiveness, and does but has the side effect of switching gender)
you know that has potential, migh use that once my computer is fixed
ChaosDragon25 chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
please for the love of all that us fluffy make this a full story
Blitzstrahl chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
Naughty bit of fun. You even kept it clean bravo.
marlastiano chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
Nice :)
SarahTaylorTam chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
good little short there isn't enough fem harry femslash. Keep up the good work
animeromance1972 chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
THIS WOULD BE A GREAT FULL STORY!
sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
please a sequel to this story thank you I loved it.
Dawn Ryder113 chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
Please make a sequel to this focusing on Rise and Hermione's relationship. A bit I'd a slice of life. Or you can have it about the two of them fighting off Dumbledore's manipulations while staving off the worser aspects of Magical Society.
serenityselena chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
an interesting and unexpected way to finish the war that hasn't yet...
and a happy situation for Rose and Hermione _
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
No chance of a sequel?
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