Reviews for What Do You Want?
Sonic Wooten chapter 2 . 2/10/2017
...Very very excited to see where this goes...Absolutely love how this story is flowing and seeing a completely different side of Ranma and Nabiki, especially together. Well written and has left me wanting so badly for the next chapter.
marlastiano chapter 3 . 2/10/2017
:)
ElvisF231 chapter 2 . 2/9/2017
Please continue the story, i love it :3
a reader chapter 2 . 2/4/2017
nice :)
K chapter 2 . 2/4/2017
This has really really grown on me
Yasha-HebiHime chapter 2 . 2/4/2017
Well then!

Firstly let me say that the majority of the events went pretty well! Nabiki not being a morning person, the weird Volley Ball thing fitting with the small spark of Chaos Ranma seems to attract, and... Well, Nabiki in general, really. I can't think of any major points that I feel the need to point out, though...

For the last few scenes, I did expect an offhand comment about "Well, I'm half girl, does that mean anything" for the dancing bit. Also Ranma /does/ know how to dance... Sort of. He did do "Anything Goes Ballroom Dancing"... I think. My memory is a bit hazy on that, although that still wouldn't be the same thing~

Still! Buzzed or not, I'm very surprised to see the kiss come so early! I expected another day or two at least... Or even two more chapters! I'm sure the backlash of this, mentally at least, is going to be very ... interesting. Especially since it might affect them back home in Nerima.

But it also might seal the deal in making Ranma run his plans by Nabiki first, as she demanded earlier. I'm sure that'll let her appreciate how smart Ranma can be when he puts his mind to it... and maybe a little scared. Fandom with Ranma often put him on par with Nabs for spontaneous plans, though hers are always more thought out and devious.

Anywho, lookin' forward to more!

Happy writing!

~Yasha-HebiHime
Guest chapter 2 . 2/2/2017
Er...no. He definitely don't want Nabiki who will sell out her family for money. Seriously, she is the worst with morals.
SumKnewPhan chapter 2 . 2/2/2017
I recently discovered this fic, and after reading the first two chapters, am anxiously waiting for the continuation. I think you capture Ranma and Nabiki well, and their interaction and development is going to be fantastic to read. I look forwards to the next update!
James Birdsong chapter 2 . 2/2/2017
Wonderful chapter.
technoid chapter 2 . 2/2/2017
So cruel, with a cliffhanger like that! Still liking it though
CtrlXDel-Right chapter 2 . 2/1/2017
Nice. Not many people are able to rationalize that to Ranma, normal is anything but. You have done a great job of characterizing Ranma as he sees what it is like to live for himself.
Review guy chapter 2 . 2/1/2017
This was a nice chapter my friend. Loved it all!
Ryu Vision chapter 2 . 2/3/2017
oh god...they moment u put the MXC stuff in... I about died... of laughter...sorry I had always liked that show...

so keep up the good work man... I enjoyed this story so far
Rusty Thebanite chapter 2 . 2/2/2017
Ehehe, love it.
rancheesan chapter 1 . 2/2/2017
What can i say but totally awesome love it has a very real life feel to it. PLEASEEEEE update soon.
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