Pffffft Ha ha ha ha! Gotta admit, when you introduced the volleyball team dressed as hotdogs I nearly burst out laughing. But as I was in a dead silent hallway full of people I merely kept it to amused huffs so as not to draw attention.

This chapter was pretty great. A bit sappy, but great nonetheless. Humor was mixed at appropriate amounts with dramatic internal monologues and everything seemed very Ranma-ish unlike a number of other "dramatic" stories. Absolutely wonderful. Bravo. How many words are there that mean the same thing? If there was a dictionary with only positive words, I would throw it at you and hope that it sufficed. This story is filling the RnamaXNabiki fanfic shaped hole in my heart.

Nice done :)

He really dose not know how to be any thing but a martial artist and not knowing how to interact with others . It puts me in to mind of two other types of stories I like to read one being Harry Potter, his life is basically being controlled in about every aspect he like Ranma has no social skills and dose not know what he wants only what others expect of him.

The other is Naruto who's life is consumed with training that , like Ranma , has little education and even worse social skills.

Now that the to have kissed we will have to wait to see what Nabiki reaction will be.

Ending on a kiss...YOU EVIL, HEARTLESS SO-AND-SO!

very nicely done. well, and I like how the characters have developed.

One word... mooooooore

I enjoyed it very much.

Great chapter, keep up the good work.

I like it! please don't leave it hanging! You have me hooked and in need of another chapter.
It's very nice idea, I always thought both Ranma and Akane need help being social and mature before they are able to have any kind of relationship. Whether it's cannon or not I don't care, it's fan fiction after all :) I did see a few grammar and syntax errors that can easily be fixed i.e. the word "use" when you meant "us" and "what" instead of "why" etc. I recommend one more check before posting to cover those little errors. Otherwise great job and keep writing, you have a nice easy fluid style that is a joy to read - thank you!

I really like how Ranma is being characterized in this story.

Oh snap! I sense a slap in Ranma's immediate future.

Keep up the good work.

Ah, now that's how you end a chapter. :D So hard to find a story where Nabiki keeps her mercenary outlook on life, yet actually has a personality beyond that but not to the point she becomes unrecognizable.

A Nabiki/Ranma fic with potential!
Oh i do so love these stories.

This is truly fantastic writing! didn't spot any misspellings, you're showing all sides of the characters, OCs are fun and believable, and...it's my pairing! XD Love it and looking forward to the next chapter!

This is REALLY fun so far:-)