Should be after romilda 2

Should be after Luna 2

Should be after Luna Lovegood

Should be after Cho 2

Boring

This should be after Hermione 2

This should after Hannah Abbott

This should have followed Romilda Vane

This should be chapter 4 instead of 6

Wow Christina, you really did bring a little joy to my heart... and lap.

Hetro guy here - great work. I thought the awkward scenes were painfully (no pun intended) honest and my favourite scenes where when the female members lost themselves in their carnal desires.

Draco getting in on the harem was hilarious and in all that absurdity you captured his voice. Wonderful.

I'm impressed that you managed to write such a fantastical story, in such a fantastic setting, while retaining more than a semblance of believability. I found myself captivated and interested.

I also appreciate your disclosure in your profile, Christina. I didn't read your profile until after I completed HPHH, but knowing your sexuality allows me to believe more in the female characters and the authenticity of their pleasure as each one takes her turn.

Your honesty also increases my admiration of what you've accomplished, given this is a hetro-oriented story, so thanks for being so open. I can't speak for every reader, and I don't expect it of authors; I was pleasantly surprised to find that knowing a little about you has increased my enjoyment of, and engagement with, your writing.

I'm by no means a smut connoisseur (give it time...) and any time I browsed a 'harem' fic they just bored the hell out of me (oh Harry, your a Lord by Right of Conquest, save me from my betrothal contract blah, blah blah magic bonding blah blah mistress, blah, blah now you're a Super!Dragon!Phoenix! animagus... *smh, move to next story*) so your fic was a lovely surprise that I'll return to in the future.

Your story has inspired an interest I didn't know I had: I'll be reading your other works, and 'Good Harry Potter Harem Fics' is now going to end up in my browsing history, Christina. All because of you.

Thank you.

The Story by itself have several good points. But adding stupidity like rape without consequence is bad, bringing Ginny back is another stupidity. I havent read all of IT because after the Romilda stupidity I cant read any more.

As a straight male... this was fappable! Well done!

1. Neville is quite famous in his own right for killing the snake and being the rebellion leader at Hogwarts. So using his hair in polyjuice wasn't a good idea.
2. Neville would most likely have too repeat the year at Hogwarts as he had to go into hiding in the room of requirements.

really good story

I think that Hannah, Pansy and Parvati will make fine members of the Hogwarts Harem.
However, I also think that Katie Bell, Daphne Greengrass and Tracey Davis and Luna
Lovegood would also make good Harem members.