This story was awesome!

Harry you sly dog you ;)

Wow, this was really well written! To be honest, I thought the sex scenes were better written than a lot by people who are straight!

I loved this story. Thank you.

Well my goodness.

I don't normally review anything often, but you get to read from me twice, it seems. Now where to begin...

This story has genuinely generated the most interest I've ever had for the HP-verse. I didn't care for the movies - much less approved of the casting choices with few exceptions - and from second-hand hearsay, Rowling's style didn't appeal to me enough to spend hours and hours going through the texts. But this did.

Now, I'm not really what you'd call a pornographer. Your visceral detail was...impressive, I suppose...but to me, that wasn't the focus that made this story work. I like harems, but I've seen and read enough of them to understand the right and wrong ways to write them. Giving the girls their own identity, even if you borrow them from a source of the fandom, is what makes the bond that Harry shares with them meaningful. Otherwise they're just dollotrons of flesh. I was a bit worried at first because of Hannah's strange aggression in the first chapter, but unlike so many other writers that try their hands at this theme, I ultimately found that you avoided this as much as I think you could have.

As for your lesbianism, well. I wasn't expecting that. But then again, how does one expect a lesbian to write? I'm not a girl, but I do like them. So from a heterosexual point of view, I'd say all your research into this matter paid off. For as uncomfortable as I assume this was for you to write, you did it very well! Bravo!

I follow your stuff on Deviant Art too, by the way. And I personally use the fan art from your gallery as inspiration to visualize the world you made here. Not sure if you intended that, but it certainly gave it an extra layer.

As an English teacher, I would have been willing to beta-edit this for you too. You don't have a lot of mistakes, but I did catch some consistent lexical errors you had a habit of making with grammar and word formation. Not enough to spoil a good read though, heh.

I think that about wraps this shit up. I don't know how active you are in the community anymore, or (being over a year since you finished) you still read your reviews even. But you've earned a review count in the triple digits for no stupid reason, and let it never be said that not even one of them counted. *grandiose thumb gesture towards self*

A fellow writer,

~E

I don't exactly mesh well the concept of genderbending, but good God, that whole fiasco was fucking funny. Even after sleeping on it, I'll have no idea what to think. I just imagined Lauren Lopez from "A Very Potter Musical" dramatically rolling all around Harry going "Oh, I see... You can't even sleep with a girl while she's begging for it." *rolls around some more* "Clearly...you haven't the courage to tussle with a higher caliber wizard!"

holy shit

Holy shit, I can't write that good and I'm straight. . well, at most bi because I've never found a girl I want 2 go that far with

Really cool story, thanks for sharing!

Gah! I was so hoping on a kitty lemon... :-)

Classic

I really enjoyed reading this story.

Thank god I thought they were gonna fuck and I was gonna throw up

Poop

Well I must say that this was one of the more amusing Harry Potter harem stories that I've read. For a smut fanfic, it was very well written. I like that it wasn't totally about the sex (just mostly haha), and I felt that the Harry/Ginny dynamic that lasted for as long as it did was very much realistic of their situation. The way they came to terms with it wasn't surprising either. That wasn't meant to be a pun by the way.

Anyway, great job writing a realistic harem story. Especially given the difficulty you had with writing the relationships. That didn't really show by the way. Thanks for taking the time to write this.