Sex with Hermione was funny and very hot. Loved it

Luna is just great. Just love her

Yep harry is weak willed but then again it's not fair to blame you after all you have to work with the hand you were dealt and in making the story after everything happened you are stuck with cannon harry that let everyone make fun of him instead of a badass harry :v

Oh cmon what the heck, why is harry suck a weak willed guy with everything he does? And now he is gonna fuck ginny because of it

Lol me and my pervey mind thought that he was gonna seduce mcgonagall and she was young and sexy but used glamours to look a lot older like a story I read once :v

That is such bullshit who are these ppl your story is mild very mild by comparison to many fics on this site ill tell you what I tell others whos been threatend it's not true keep writeing and see for your self who's right and who's wrong

It's really sad that some immature idiot is able to bring a good story down by throwing a tantrum. There are fics floating around that are actually disturbing in their sex scenes and those have been there for years. If tasteful smut scenes like those in HP and the HH aren't your thing, then leave and don't come back whining that it's inappropriate. Especially becauge age was mentioned. I'm pretty sure there are HP fics in which the kids are sexually active at age 12/13 for God's sake. Those are inappropriate! This fic doesn't even come close to bullshit like that. I happen to really enjoy the realism of the situations, as well as, the general plotline that makes it all come together as a whole, and I will definitely continue reading this on AO3, no matter what some whining person says. Once again, love the story, and keep up the good work.

what you have to understand about is that only gay/lesbian stories are OK and you can have all the violence, swearing and even rape you want but god help you if its normal consensual heterosexual sex. please note I'm not gay bashing just stating the facts about this site.

Considering all the plot in this I think you should get a pass.
And Vanangue? What an ass! Reminds me of Malfoy. 'Wait till my moderator hears about this!'

I enjoy your story. Please continue writing

Varangue is just a sour grape who can't write so bullies and threatens others in spite which is Disgraceful he says he believes in free speech but is hypocritical people who report stories for their content even though you are using the m rated its up to the reader what to read you even have warning of content in your description that's my opinion this is a great story

You can always take it to .com

Sorry that you got slamed.

fucking nark! I've seen smuttier works in ffn and they have been up in ages. Hell malexmale mpreg is worst than this but there are thousands of them in this site!

I've enjoyed you fic so far. As for this "Dick" who is threatening you I'd just ignore him and keep posting more chapters until something actually happens. I'll be looking for you on AO3 though.