I know this is smut without much of a plot, but I'd like to say, you write a really fucking good Harry and Hermione. It's kind of awkward and cute. I never really considered them much of a couple, but I kind of wish you had a story that just focused on them getting together in one of the books and being like this but more focused on the awkwardness of them getting together.

At last!

Go for it!

For a moment, I thought you might actually do it

Loving Luna,she's a star...great story

Never ever ever ever ever sleep with you ex especially if he/she still has feelings Goddamn talk about adding two more years to a dead relationship

Interesting story looking forward to the next chapter

And The other girls in the changing room? Awaiting more.

re: AN, yes. yes I was very worried. I appreciate you keeping it just a joke

"a good man like dumbledore". *insert sarcastic laughter*

I think you were spot on in how Hermione would approach sex for the first time I really enjoyed the way you brought this believable scene to life in fact it's what makes this story so good is that it is believable all of it I see happening in real life I look forward to more

nice work

You should make harry get his hands on dean for what he did

Damn girl! Hermione go stamina!

Ah Awaiting more.